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Old 12 December 2006   #46
Good model and soundtrack

Like the models, and your soundtrack is a good start. Maybe some bore base.
/peter

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Old 12 December 2006   #47
-> SweD
Thank for critique, that's what i actually need. Yes i have some more variations with this track, but now i want to try some other track's. And it really really wonderful to understand that there is some people on our planet that know what is trip hop

-> The-Shift
Thank's very much, i'm practising concepts art now, so if i have some more free time i'll show some more concepts. And it's especially cool to hear some good critique from team-command.

-> fifty3dragons
Thank's now i'm working on "Raven" model, it's a little bit hard for me, i never can do fly objects well, butt i think i can do it.

-> coolkonrad
Thank's im trying to do as i imagine it, i think i's a right way.
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Old 12 December 2006   #48
Edited storyboards or 3D pre-visualization: Soundtrack 2



Software: 3ds max

So, there is second soundtrack, but i think it would not be used in trailer..
there is third soundtrack near complete so...

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Old 12 December 2006   #49
Yeahh!!! this soundtrack is very cool!
Nice groove.

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Old 12 December 2006   #50
Nice job! I listened to your first track again as well, and I think they'd both work quite well. In fact, to me the second one felt even a little more moody (in a good way ) and a bit haunted. I guess it just depends on the overall feel you're going for. I'll be interested to hear the third one.
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Old 12 December 2006   #51
Hey targus, trip hop rules man ! and with your second tracks i will be not surprised if you said me you love tricky
Anyway, on this one, good surprised to ear chords variations, but i've some regrets to not find again the bass line of the first, which was for me, really great and give the power and rythm of your composition, but of course, i'm not a pro and give just my opinion.
The first remind me some besson's fifth element sounds, with something "arabic".

Anyway, can't wait to listen the third ! great work man
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Old 12 December 2006   #52
Thanks everyone for comments and critique.

As for intro bass line in soundtrack, i just want don't want to use a bass in the beginning of the track because i want to power a beat with it and i need a clear intro.
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Old 12 December 2006   #53
Edited storyboards or 3D pre-visualization: Raven model




So there is model of "Raven" which now im composing with scene, so i show you it soon.
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Old 12 December 2006   #54
Cool model. I really like the shape of the tail. It gives it an almost predatory feel, like it's a scorpion tail (well, a reversed one anyway) about to strike or something. Great job! Looking forward to the composite.
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Old 12 December 2006   #55
Edited storyboards or 3D pre-visualization: Shot 12 model



So.. there is shot 12 model, now i'm working with shots 13&16.

Shots 15 and 17 will be the most difficult for me, i think and there is not much time left *-*
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Old 12 December 2006   #56
Scratch Voice track and/or initial footage: Soundtrack 3



So, there is soundtrack №3. Now i have 3 soundtrack's and i think about which one to choose.
After that i'll prepare them for time-line and sfx.

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Old 12 December 2006   #57
All of the soundtracks seem quite good.
Maybe if you mix them together for variation? Just a thought...
 
Old 12 December 2006   #58
Definitely liked the last track best. Goes good with Cobra. I like the "shifting" from the intro. Sounds like it's gearing up. Cool.
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Old 12 December 2006   #59
Nice modelling in your shot 12. It's all coming together. I enjoyed the 3rd soundtrack too. They've all been good. Each one sets a slightly different tone, so I guess it just depends on what overall mood you decide you want to establish. Keep it coming!
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Old 12 December 2006   #60
Edited storyboards or 3D pre-visualization: Scene's pre-viz



Some scene models. Now it's near to complete texturing process. I also have some problems with composition.

This days i'll have more time to work and i'm going to start to complete some stages of a trailer.
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