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Old 10 October 2006   #16
Thanks for the welcome the rough storyboard looks good, i'm diggin the city concept "world trade center" ish landscape going on, cool
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Old 10 October 2006   #17
Really like the style of your concepts gives the story a really nice feel to it. Are you going to do the trailer in the same dark style as your concepts? I really like shot number 7 of your storyboard I think that will come out really well. It looks as if it will be very dynamic.
 
Old 10 October 2006   #18
More great concept work. I agree with Tenacious; I really like the dark style you've got going here as well and I hope it carries over into the final product. I find it very compelling just from stylistic point of view. Keep it coming!
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Old 10 October 2006   #19
Edited storyboards or 3D pre-visualization: Raven



This is a Raven concept. It's a fly battle machine made only for assault and destry everything around it.

I whant to make it look strong, heavy and a little bit ugly like all battle machines.

You can see that front part of Raven is look like Ka-52 "Blak Shark", because i think it's one of the most powerfull military design ever made :)
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Old 11 November 2006   #20
Cool

great concept work. love the dark and stryiking style you deal with light and hope i'll see a strong 3d animated translation of them. keep up the great work, best of luck and keep on rocking
 
Old 11 November 2006   #21
Edited storyboards or 3D pre-visualization: Storyboard



So, there is my edited storyboard. I think it show how i see the trailer and how i whant to do it.

Before draw each shot i think about scene construction and try to found optimal composition, it's must be fast and optimal to model.
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Old 11 November 2006   #22
Edited storyboards or 3D pre-visualization: Storyboard



Storyboard
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Old 11 November 2006   #23
Edited storyboards or 3D pre-visualization: Storyboard



Storyboard
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Old 11 November 2006   #24
Edited storyboards or 3D pre-visualization: Storyboard



I think i can do it... may be. *-*
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Old 11 November 2006   #25
And thank's everyone for comments, i really really need it.
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Old 11 November 2006   #26
Great boards! And you can do it! This has a clear, logical flow to it.

One comment: I note that there's no image between Shot 6 and Shot 7 which sort of breaks the rhythm established throughout the rest of the opening sequence (i.e. shot, text, shot, text, etc). It does emphasize the text in Shot 7, though, and perhaps that's what you were going for? Anyway, just thought I'd mention it since for me it did stick out a bit.

Also, I wonder if showing the shot of the world and the nuclear explosions in Shot 8 and then having that key text ("Who will get it first?") follow in Shot 9 is somewhat anti-climactic (since it sort of gives away the visual impact before the question is posed)? Would it work better having another image in 8 and then the nukes follow? I'm not sure.

Great stuff, though. It's nice to see your concepts all put together like this.

Hope that helps some. Just one opinion, of course, so ignore it if it doesn't
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Old 11 November 2006   #27
Thank for comments.

So there is no image betveen 6 and 7 shot because a have 2 positions:
- i can use some additional scene
- i can make a one shot from 4 and 6
So i think about it later.

As for 8 and 9 shots - it's really problem shots, i make some other types of this part of the story and choose this one. I can't discribe it by words but i have an idea how to make it good enough. And there will be a pause between 9 and 10 shots in order to suddenly bring scene from silence to action. Music will help a lot i think.
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Old 11 November 2006   #28
MH! Pretty original!! and very dramatic! I like the concept style and the very dramatic direction! Keep it up!
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Old 11 November 2006   #29
Edited storyboards or 3D pre-visualization: Scene #1 - Modelling



There is a model of Scene #1.

It's complete but i can't understand, if i need some small detailes or something else. So.. if you have any crit - go on.
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Old 11 November 2006   #30
WOW! hey Targus! great detail on thouse radiotelescopes!!! Im impressed! can't wait to see this scene complete!!
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