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Old 12 December 2006   #61
Hey Mark,

This piece is look great, love the idea they are posing for a photo

Cheers
Mark
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Old 12 December 2006   #62
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This is one amazing piece of ART!

Absolutely stunning idea of the photo-posing and the "united-front-flags"...
I love this stuff. Good structures and excellent weight visible on the texturing and the paint job.
In here you can really see the enormous scale of the place.
Very vivid lighting. Fabulous, quality work.
 
Old 12 December 2006   #63
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Mark, bloody good work!..I have to point out however that community interaction is a big part of how your pieces are judged..and seeing that perhaps your 10 posts are all in this thread, there is a distinct possibility that this could be (edit) penalized

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3)Participate in the Community by critiquing other challenger's works in the respective forums.

5)# Submit Work In Progress images, obtain feedback and give feedback to other challengers in the WIP challenge. Note: Failure to do so may result in penalties during final judging. Community interaction is a must!


this piece is too good to throw out!

it really doesn't take that much effort. i've clocked in 40+ comments in my week and a bit of being on here and due to a glitch i can't view all entrants, so there would have been more!.

anyways good luck!

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Old 12 December 2006   #64
Hey Mark,

Stunning so far. I like how you were able to keep the colors low key and just punched it up in some places to guide the eye. Excellent atmosphere as well. So I'm trying to think here what you can do to punch it up even more. Letís see...

Composition...check
Depth...check
Atmosphere...CHECK
FG,MG,BG...check
Captivating architecture...check
Population besides main characters...ok so hereís where I think you can improve your picture. Now I haven't had the chance to read through the whole book so I may be wrong but I think a little bustle would really give that place some life.

And although many of us might not be able to match LightSovereigns 40+ posts a week, (0vo), he has a point about participating as best we can. You can start spilling your guts...starting with me . Ahem, are some of the new foreground elements such as the roads started as 3D elements as well?

Excellent work. Iím Looking forward to seeing this one done.
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Old 12 December 2006   #65
RE : Participation. I completely agree and feel very guilty now. Thanks for the kick! I will endeavor to participate more. Need to get use to the forums more I be thinking. Off I go...
 
Old 12 December 2006   #66
Oh and be prepared to see "MarkyG" all over the place then hehe. Not really - well maybe.
 
Old 12 December 2006   #67
Originally Posted by RaresHalmagean: LightSovereigns 40+ posts a week, (0vo), .


ahehe, might be an exaggeration. i had about 53 when i started, im in to my nineties now..i didn't account for comments in my thread..sorry mark, didn't mean to come off as condiscending/sp?. just giving a heads up ^^.
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Old 12 December 2006   #68
Incredible work man! One of mine favorites, keep on rocking
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Old 12 December 2006   #69
Originally Posted by MarkyG: RE : Participation. I completely agree and feel very guilty now. Thanks for the kick! I will endeavor to participate more. Need to get use to the forums more I be thinking. Off I go...


Haha, don't feel guilty man, I don't think they are judging this contest on forum participation. The last contest did have a community award that was awarded to people that give a lot of good feedback, but definitely start dishing out your opinion. Your a great artist and I bet you can offer a lot of people good advice.

Now get your ass back to work ... pronto!! lol
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Old 12 December 2006   #70
Final composite and colour timing: Thistle



Additional mid city detail added. I returned to the cooler colour scheme.
Still need to work on the peeps.

Good luck all!
 
Old 12 December 2006   #71
Really good style. A little more lights for people and it will be just incredible work.

Well done, good luck !!!
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Old 12 December 2006   #72
The scale is what really makes this piece exceptional. Just wish I could make out more details of the characters...otherwise brilliant.
 
Old 12 December 2006   #73
I love it!! one thing that I did notice is the plasma beam seems a little small...i just imagine it bigger or is that just me...lol
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Old 12 December 2006   #74
Line Art / Model: sketch



I realised I had not put my intial line sketch up. It's not much to see...
 
Old 12 December 2006   #75
Final composite and colour timing: adding details...



Thanks for the comments and suggestions everyone. It really spurs me on. Thank you.

Now I'm refining and balancing. Another update.

Added clouds, rivers and many colour adjustments. I wanted to get the feeling that there's two cloud layers. Especially wanted to see the lower one curving up the side of the cylinder to sell the shape of it.

Merry Christmas one and all!

- Oh I made the image bigger this time. Cheers.

Last edited by MarkyG : 12 December 2006 at 12:56 AM.
 
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