Eon (Illustration) Entry: paul b castillo

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  10 October 2006
I like the colours and the ship design. Looks good sofar to me, all my best mate!
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  10 October 2006
Looking really good so far, Paul. i like the VTOL design. Looking forward to seeing it all come together more, and what you decide to do with the right hand side. Good luck!

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  10 October 2006
Love the color palette and the ship design. It has a nice industrial feel to it.
  10 October 2006
I'm impressed by your sketches. I'm interrested by the way it will goes.

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  10 October 2006
Line Art / Model: vtol

thanks for the feedback folks.
here's my update today.
right now just putting in some detail and just experimenting with some colour tones.
  10 October 2006
great work on the set and models. nice update on the lightsetup. keep uup the great work
  10 October 2006
Sorry to pick. But the perspective isn't there with the flaw. Your vantagepoint is right near the center, judging by the 'pipe' we see in the background, especially since you show radiating lines on it. So the flaw would be much closer to us, thus it would grow in size quite rapidly. That could be a nice dramatic touch, if that's OK with your vision for this piece. If you like the flaw the way it is, consider showing the pipe more looking at its left edge.

Otherwise the feel is great. I hadn't really pictured a design for the ship and now yours will be it.
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  10 October 2006
Line Art / Model: vtol - still in progress

and i'm from vacation, just alittle bit of work on this today. still fussing with the colour and whatnot, hope to get it done this week.
  11 November 2006
great perspective and colors.

keep it going.
  11 November 2006

blaze! blaze! blaze!

this is hot stuff buddy!

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  11 November 2006
Fantastic! One of my favorite at tis time, your scene looking realy great. Good luck!
  11 November 2006
Initial color pass or textured and lit model: vtol - update

here we go folks my update for the week.
i'm just about ready to call this one done. there's a couple things i still wanna tweak but my cats won't let me.

somebody mentioned the flaw looked off...i'm going to try mucking with that next. thanks again and goodnight.
  11 November 2006
interesting design of the VTOL
  11 November 2006
Woah, that looks cool! If you get the lighting right, it will be a verrrrry interesting picture. Keep goin'

  11 November 2006
Really a great image Paul!
Love the and colours and feel of the whole thing.

My only concern is the orange part in the back that sort for messes with the feeling of perspective and depth. The dark orange tube is pointing to the left of the “camera” (if you know what I mean).

Butt apart from that, great stuff!
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