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Old 11 November 2006   #16
Concept Art: first draft



Just a very quick composition sketch. i was trying to capture as much of books mood as i was able, and so we have future technology and journey and longing for home... I guess :P In upper part Axis city accelerating to meet plasma front in far end of a tunnel; below Patricia and ghost of Liner just before she enter the Gate (blueish thing at the bottom).
As I said just a quickie to know where I want things to be. I'm not a fan of central composition but in this case I think its nicely emphasise scene size

Please Do comment! I'm still not sure if I should go this way
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Old 11 November 2006   #17
Well, I really like it! Great motion, nice color contrast, and it balances the large scale with the personal really well. I say go for it! I'm not sure what I think of the engines on the back of the city: On one hand, in the book, it din't have them, i don't think: I was under the impression that all fo the moving down the flaw was based on complex interections with the flaw's unique gravitational effects. On the other hand, the engines, while maybe not accurate, really give that feeling of moving forward/downwards that you're looking for. So maybe it's best to keep them, but I just was thinking about that a bit.
Anyhow, hope you'll develop this further... good luck!

-mike
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Old 11 November 2006   #18
Concept Art: first draft v2.0



Thank u Walrus for reminding me of that. I used engines to create a feeling that city above is moving really really fast, I don't think that would be possible to show just by drawing flaw getting thicker and burn up (just like in the book). Thou Ill think about showing this in a different way

And here is another take on the same subject - this one is more dynamic but less spectacular... I guess... What do you think?
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Old 11 November 2006   #19
Myself, I have a slight preference for the second-to-last one, the symmetrical one. First, I really like the contrast of the forground and the background, all the blue light that opening the gate is causing. Secondly, I think the way you've positioned the charcter(s) in that one, it seems like we would be looking at their front view, not their backs. That's really the big difference for me... well, NOT all that big, really, they're both nice.
Just my thoughts on it...

-mike
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Old 11 November 2006   #20
The latest one with the characters to the right seems to have more emotion in it, but I like the contrast in the more symmetrical one (the changes from blue to orange to red display alot of great contrast). The composition on the latest drawing also seems stronger, but I like the character silohuette from the symmetrical one more. So it really seems like combining the two would be the best in my opinion.
 
Old 11 November 2006   #21
I 'd have to go with the second composition... it looks more like everything has a direction that they are headed to... great sketch by the way and choice of color...
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Old 11 November 2006   #22
instant eyecatcher, love the radical angle and the striking colorset. looking forweard to what you make of it, keep on rocking!
 
Old 11 November 2006   #23
Hi Marek, Saw the thunbnail of ur piece and had to come check it out... fantastic imagery. Colours are WOW. Keep up the great work :-)
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Old 11 November 2006   #24
Eon Illustration Category



Side by Side comparisons So that you know who is doing

what in the illustration category of the eon challenge only.

Classifier followed by artists.

: Strong/Beautiful Foreground Potraits with EON elements in the background.

Movie Posters theme.

Characters in dramatic poses.

Characters have detailed skin,muscle and skeletal structures.

Very Detailed Vehicle showed prominently

Marek Okon

Edward Cicka

Tuan Nguyen

Linda Luksic(Based on Sacha Word Of Mouth)

Linda Smith

William Leafe

Raffy Encarnacion Dermawan

Marco Alejandro Castelan Morales

John Streider

Radu Bogdan Boeru

Tiberius Viris

Sacha angel diener

Niklas Frostgard

Michael van den bosch

sandra bott

michael dashow

nabil hamadi

alwyn talbot

timur kiryashov

damir g martin

Nathan L Bachelder

Daniel lu visi

Maurizio Manzieri

dale thomas

ego lataire

rune rask

guo jian

hugo araujo

: massive architectures,detailed cityscapes,plasma tubes,huge eon elements viewed in the distance in the style of grand space opera with miniscule,faceless,diminutive men ,women and all terrain machines reacting and responding to the environment.



Tuan Nguyen

Jesse Speak

Timur Kiryashov

Mark Goldsworthy

Roman Bernhard Eppstein

Raffy Encarnacion Dermawan

Tiberius Virius

remko troost

tolgahan gungor

torsten wolber

nathaniel west

ramy badie

bryce smith

martin nielsen

emrah elmasli

mauricio alvarado kladt

prabath wijayantha

maciej frolow

nilesh ambekar

constantinos krystallis

greg kaperski

adrian fekete

reinaldoromero

marcin j. nikiforuk

james nelms

maurizio manzieri

jarek sznytzer

Derek wilson

Nazirull Safry Paijo

Daniel justin bird

dale thomas

erik linden

rune rask

david freeman

ori arad

markus graf

ali jalali

raffy encarnacion

alex kelly

jennifer Kathleen Phillips

: air ,sea atmosperics featuring natural elements of islands,skies blend into a grand sense of scale.Includes Tree elements.Gaia oriented.Mountain views and Spectacular chamber vistas. Sky atmospherics

lei huang

adrian baluta

gonzalo golpe

gunilla elam

jonathan colvin

guo jian

oscar jostedt

brian Slayton

yann tisseron

yaroslav kravchenko

dusten s. sonnon

: party scene with the character interacting and gossiping

Parties gathered at gate opening

Radu Bogdan Boeru

nekomouse

Phillip Buchanan

: wonderful sense of humor even black humor and caricature

Torsten Wolber

per trystad

mark david

: action packed conflict with eon elements in the backdrop and lots of machines,ships,cities and soldiers

thierry schiel

paul hume

: entire cities,planetary bodies,asteroids,weather systems,gates,singularities,flawships and space vehicles in awe inspiring perspectives with large scale explosions.Ships have beautiful designs.Space Atmospherics.



Phillip Buchanan

Dmitri G Michniouk

Mark Alford

sacha angel

neville de souza

prabath wijayantha

greg kaperski

mona eriksson

attilla kurt

vladimir davidenko

paul b castillo

juha kamarainen

mauricio alvarado kladt

joel carlo

shawn andrews

matt benya

Derek Wilson

blaz porenta

oscar jostedt

pavel elagin

yann tisseron

blaz porenta

: detailed explanatory tutorials

sacha angel

matt benya





 
Old 12 December 2006   #25
Oooo

I'll be following this one closely. I like what I see!
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Old 12 December 2006   #26
oooh yes - I love the second concept! tak trzymac!
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Old 12 December 2006   #27
It's great to see you join the comp Marek. I really enjoy your latest concept.
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Old 12 December 2006   #28
Thumbs up It comes alive!

Compositionally much, much better! The previous one, while having that sort of "eternal" quality that verticality can give, just doesn't compare to the sense of motion that just a bit of offset in the POV gives.

Coloring looks good too with the cools coming in at the bottom. As you keep experimenting, you might want to experiment with cooling the engine light as well to offset the fiery plasma tube light, but that may not be necessary.

Looks great!

*sigh* I'm so far behind...
 
Old 12 December 2006   #29
Hey Marek
I really liked that first central composition but the second is most certainly stronger... I think tho that you should try to bring that cold blue from the first back in.. it just seems that the second one is missing that cracking contrast.

Love the sketching style btw

Sean
 
Old 12 December 2006   #30
Gosh, which one to choose?. what i liked by the first concept piece is the contrast of the blue ground to the sky, looks fantastic. the second one has a better flare effect And i like how you can see the plasma better. Both are as good as each other!.

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