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Old 03-26-2013, 03:00 PM   #16
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Agreed, her hips are not helping, I think they are too low.
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Old 03-26-2013, 06:32 PM   #17
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Looking good. I didn't notice the lace on her neck the first time, that looks great.
Agreed with the previous 2 comments. Also I think her face needs to be a bit rounder in the cheeks.
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Old 03-26-2013, 08:51 PM   #18
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Thanks for the feedback guys.
Cheese: I think the corset thickness is subtracting from the hourglass form a bit. I am planning on pushing those verts in a bit. Also, I have departed a bit from the reference, wanted to get a top with a bit more support.

Airflow: thanks for the comments too. I'm going to tweak the corset a bit, and it should help with the hips.

Wyatt: thanks for the comments on the neck lace, I spent waaay too long on that piece. I totally agree with the cheeks comment, definitely going to push those. Also going to lengthen the fingers a bit more.

.... Still pushing ahead with updates, thanks guys
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Old 03-27-2013, 10:55 AM   #19
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I watch gladly this thread, Thanks for show the great work.
the proportions are not ready but you're going to get better Proprtion in eye.
I think anything for you in the future no obstacle.
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Old 03-29-2013, 09:05 AM   #20
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Your 4-5th post shows the hips are like a bracket shape ( || ) where as they should be a tapered figure 8 shape. this is throwing off the corset too. And she is a bit knock kneed.
Check this SideShow model out, I know the SNK image of her has very slight hips, but there is more to hers in width and height than your showing in yours.
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Old 04-01-2013, 12:59 AM   #21
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Thanks for the comments Airflow and Tombery, still working on tweaks for the model, all of the comments have been very appreciated. Added more details to the the textures and played with a new pose here.

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Old 04-01-2013, 01:02 AM   #22
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Looking really good!
Well done
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Old 04-04-2013, 01:31 PM   #23
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Thanks Kanga,
Working on the last push for the model now. Tweaking little things and adding details where I can.
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Old 04-05-2013, 01:40 PM   #24
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Cool. I would thin the cheeks down abit, on manga characters the faces are quite flat.
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Old 04-12-2013, 10:41 PM   #26
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Posted my final image. This was a really fun challenge, really enjoyed participating.
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