Originally Posted by batte812
Hi Alexander, great work on these characters. Are they meant for a gam or something? Are you going to animate them?
A few remarks: the lower arm and the upper leg of the girl look a tad too long. And the folds in the clothes are a bit unnatural. The muscular blue guy turned out the best so far i think. keep going!
Thank you for the feedback. I really like your constructive critics, not just some sugar-coated pills.
Though those are useful for us too from time to time too.
The characters are for a short which I make with my friend for a long time. Yes, I will animate them after retopology. I had previous versions of characters, but they were much, much worse. That's why I decided to learn anatomy and zbrush. And I don't regret so far.
Just for fun, you can take a look what I had before
I will take a break and revise the characters with a fresh outlook, maybe will see more mistakes.
I wil recheck the proportions, I guess you are right.
I agree about the clothes, this part turned to be difficult to me. Is it about all the clothes of just a girl? I guess all... But be frank and blatant, this is important to me, as I want to make them well.
Thank you for taking your time and honesty.