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  04 April 2006
Thnx Rebeccak for such a quick reply! Here is a reference photo of that man..



I did have lots of problems painting his hands and knees coz they r so complex. And thnx so much for ur threads. I didnt know how to approach to a human body painting. Now that I saw ur starts with black and white soft brush strokes, everything is just so easy and quick to build a main form of a character. Thnx a lot for doing that
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  04 April 2006
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Hey, you're most welcome! Thanks so much for the compliment and feedback!

One thing that I think might help his right wrist is to slightly lighten the top part of the arm, as currently the values of the top and side of the arm / wrist are a bit close, and this flattens that area out. It looks like your wrist is pretty faithful to the photograph ~ sometimes you have to exxaggerate the existing features to get them to 'read', and this might be the case here ~ the man's wrists are a bit thin and even frail ~ you might try to just add a bit of emphasis to his right wrist, but not too much, to make it look stronger and more substantive.

Hope this helps!

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  04 April 2006
Thank u once again for that detailed reply I think I found the mistake on the wrist and correct it... what u think? Is it still a problem?

before/after:

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  04 April 2006
I really like the legs and the torso of that figure!
 
  04 April 2006
jrdollesin: nice sketches.. but with all the respect, I think everybody should have its own thread.. and not uplouding their pics to other ones... best regards! blaz
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  04 April 2006
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jrdollesin,

Hi there, I agree with blaz ~ so I've created your own Anatomy Thread here:

Anatomy Thread of jrdollesin

If you will kindly copy your work from this thread to your new thread, and remove your work from this thread, I would appreciate it.

Looking forward to critiquing your work on your new thread!

Cheers,

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  04 April 2006
sorry guys for being unethicak, especially to you NINJA and rebeccack i was unconscious when i post these, due to over excitement to see my works exposed.

thank you for your attentions.
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  04 April 2006
Hi Ninja,

I like your angel, he looks a bit angry or mysterious. The anatomy (to me) looks good and the wings too.

Looking out for more steps.

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  04 April 2006
Hi...NinjaASSN // Blaz...

There is a pair of wings in the... Favorite Figurative Artists - Links... that you might want to take a look at....They are on page # 2...frame # 24....Caravaggio link.... 1600 - 03 ..they
are at the bottom of that page...you can enlarge them 200 per cent, and change the
background to black at the top of the screen, to get a better look at them......I think that
something simaler to those might look great on your figure.
I don't know the story behind your dark angle yet, but those boots are really not doing anything for me....would like to see some nice feet there, with stress on the toes..ect
would go better with the rest of the figure I think...just my personal opinion though.
Really like the pose, and the expressive feeling and mood that you have captured here,
just with expression alone, and without having to rely on anything else...GREAT JOB...

TAKE CARE
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  04 April 2006
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jrdollesin,

No worries! I have since moved your work to your own thread, here:

http://forums.cgsociety.org/showthr...543#post3447543

Cheers,

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  04 April 2006
thnx for all the kind words and critics ofcors It will be posted in the finished threads soon I hope. Thnx to all for ur help, especially to u Rebeccak for those wrist tips

SpiritDreamer: I see what u mean, but I left him his boots on, coz I think this way he is something special, not so ordinary.. And also black boots fits well into the shadow under him, make him one with the dark. Thank u for ur long and great post
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  04 April 2006
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NinjaA55N,

No problem! When you post your final piece, please post a link to the thread here.

Cheers,

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  04 April 2006
I finnaly found out why it took so long to submit my piece.. thare is that hidden checkbox in a submission form to check if u read all the agreement policy... huh! OK.. there is the link to my newest piece, called Not so Angel.

Best regards and thnx to all one more time.
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  04 April 2006
Hi dude! love the colours of the sky, very cool. Talking about the wings mmm, don´t know, I think some tones are too dark but, anyway, cool image


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  04 April 2006
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Ah, very cool, thanks for the link. Comment posted!

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