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  08 August 2013
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Just some fun with short projection.





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  08 August 2013
Hio Jacek,

I think in general the camera move and projection works pretty well. Though things that aren't is:

- The Jet, strange motion blur and color correction/black levels and animation speed, it curves up really fast.
- Black levels in general for the houses on the right.
- The houses on right seem really big, as big as the mountain peaks and it moves too fast, maybe put them further back in Z depth and smaller in scale.
- Planet in the back too bright, and the shadow side should fade into the sky color, or else it'll seem like it's closer to us than anything in the sky. It's really the furthest so it should blend pretty well with the sky in the shadow, and not be too bright.
- The atmosphere is nice

Cool work Jacek!
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  08 August 2013
Looks like I made many mistakes in comp phase. I will try to fix them all. Thank you
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