The Journey Begins Challenge (3D) Entry: Ali Jalali

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Old 04 April 2006   #16

mmh also i'd recommend a more dramatic lighting than in the 3D concept, like dawn or something like that
Old 04 April 2006   #17
It's good idea ,have fun !~
Old 04 April 2006   #18
This is a good pose, but you are going to have to put a lot of expression in the other character going on the jounery, because you have the little girl's back turned away from the viewer.
Old 04 April 2006   #19

Thanks all guys... for critics ... i hope i can complete it nicely.
Drummer >>> im agree about the left leg , i will try to fix it.
DDS >>> i have thought about that... but i like a sharp and cartooni environment.
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Last edited by living_for_cg : 04 April 2006 at 03:33 PM.
Old 04 April 2006   #20
Thumbs up

what a wondeful work , really great
Old 04 April 2006   #21
I feel that if we able to see a little more perspective of the girl face would be good too. It might help in delivering more expression and hopefully bring depth to your overall concept. Just my 2cents. Great job so far~keep it up
Old 04 April 2006   #22
Modeling: the man character

the man basic modeling working on his textures now.
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Old 04 April 2006   #23
Looking sweet so far, although as said before, getting enough expression into the guys face is going to be fairly hard :(

Good luck with it though, and have fun!
Old 04 April 2006   #24
Cool great work here!

Great work here!
great idea!i like it very much!
good modeling skils! so far.. .
looking for a great work here!
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Old 04 April 2006   #25
hey love the characters =) maybe the guy could look a bit more sad though? like he wants to and looks forward to the trip but he's still sad to leave her, hence the reaching out and such... great job though keep it up =)
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Old 04 April 2006   #26

thanks for your critics... soon there will be more updates...
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Old 04 April 2006   #27
great Idea!!

very nice character.good luck. watching for updates

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Old 04 April 2006   #28

looking for more... .. .
good luck!
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Old 04 April 2006   #29
ooops, this is great job my friend.

keep it going and try hard to finish it.

hope u the bests
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Old 04 April 2006   #30
Modeling: balloon bascket

here is the balloon bascket with some travel tools in it and the character...Now im working on some small and nice animals ...
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