The Journey Begins Challenge (3D) Entry: Guilherme de Toledo Costa

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Old 04 April 2006   #16
Shading (Textured and lit): posture test



ok.... the first composition test...
looking like this i think that my model needs much more modeling... and accesories too that I still will model.
Anyway!!... some textures update on the scenario..
that's it!
 
Old 04 April 2006   #17
you might want to add some details on the muscle structure of the character and do some serious texturing on his skin... is he supposed to have fur added later on?
nice ideea and great drawing
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Old 04 April 2006   #18
Shading (Textured and lit): composition test



some more details like grass and other stuff.
the modeling from the character will have updates, I decided.. i think it's a little poor like this.
 
Old 04 April 2006   #19
Really nice shadows on the grass...might want to varry individual grass blade colors a bit, likewise for clumps of grasses in different areas of the scene. The feet to your dog character are a bit poly faceted, might want to smooth them?

I kind of agree with an earlier post about putting some hair on this character -- if -- you could still maintain the stomach muscles, and general shape, with perhaps very short hair? Looking forward to seeing more -- hope you have the time to continue! Good luck!
 
Old 04 April 2006   #20
hey guys, thanks for the replies!!
I'll take your considerations and try to improve my work!
see ya!!
 
Old 05 May 2006   #21
Modeling: Modeling updates



ok, modeling updates as I told.
Now I think it's getting better... but as like any artist in the world I'm not satisfied... :-)
have fun!
 
Old 05 May 2006   #22
Modeling: Updates



more updates on the scene... some accessories!
 
Old 05 May 2006   #23
Modeling: Last Accessories



Added the final last accessories I think.
Now I'm gonna start adding some things in the background..
that's it..
 
Old 05 May 2006   #24
Hi,


Nice work, concept is nice.

Crits and obs:
Did he droped the sword to pierce the ground? If not make him hold that sword with more energy seems he dropped it.
The character is too big in composition, if I remember rules of this contest, the character should be facing something bigger than him, the journey itself (the challenge) should be the most evident. So making some space around for him would help out.
Will you use some kind of hair on the character? Would look better for this dog like.

No other crits and obs by now, it is really kool ! Keep it up! Good luck!
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Old 05 May 2006   #25
hey, thanks for the reply!!

You now, I've thinking really about the camera angle...
I don't really know if this will be the final angle and by the way I'll post a test later..
so please note it..

about the sword, he's walking without support his weight on it...
and it will have fur around his body.

that's it
see ya!
 
Old 05 May 2006   #26
Modeling: Camera test



a camera test...
wich do you guys like most???
 
Old 05 May 2006   #27
Modeling: composing



I don't think I'll change de angle of the camera anymore... even taking the advices given...
anyway, some trees on the background were added...
I think that now is post Production
 
Old 05 May 2006   #28
Post Effects and Compositing: Final Image



the final image with post production!
 
Old 05 May 2006   #29
Final Image: Final Image



the final image with fur and blur...
 
Old 05 May 2006   #30
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