The Journey Begins Challenge (3D) Entry: Lombardo Simone

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  05 May 2006
Oh my god, what an strong entry, woooo. Congrats, Hope to see soon the final image
  05 May 2006

just came wandering in to the 3d entry forums for the fist time and found yours!
really stylish.

good luck to you !
  05 May 2006
Shading (Textured and lit): sky and ambiant test

The test for the sky. and ambiant.:)
  05 May 2006
Smile thanks!

OZ, ilusiondigital and Neubius thanks a lot for support!!! Hope i can show you the final, i'm starting the textures now. I'm must hurry!!
  05 May 2006
that looks very nice already.
Hope to see your final soon.

  05 May 2006
Fantastic so far. I love the poses on the characters.
The only problem I see is that thgere are some tangents with the figures. There are few strong lines in the BG intersecting the characters in a less than appealing way. I would try to soften it somehow. color and atmoshpere may be the easiest way.

Best of luck, it's really looking great.
Kory Heinzen
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  05 May 2006

Fantastic, I think that will be one of the best.
  05 May 2006
Smile Thanks!

Russel-Nash, KOryH, tredistudio thanks a lot for support!!

KOryH, i understand, i will soften the background with the value and color, make it more lighter than foreground. And i must change the mod of the bridge line near the camera, add details.

Thanks for help and support!!
  05 May 2006
Shading (Textured and lit): Ship Textures

here an update for the ship... lot of work to do.
  05 May 2006
Shading (Textured and lit): rendering

Hi, don't know if it will work this time, can't post anything and go to forum...:(
anyway here's the all plan rendering... second try to post.
Now adjust and compo on toshop:)
  05 May 2006
Post Effects and Compositing: 1 toshop, 2 toshop, 3 toshop...:)

Hello all, here's the compo on toshop, don't really what i can change, crits are welcome...18H left :)
  05 May 2006
I think you can ad more blurry reflection on the ground. It's a great image good luck
Keep It Simple and Smart !!!
  05 May 2006
hey! your bird like space ship is superb, very fantastic job
personal website

  05 May 2006
Final Image: Final Image

Here's the final image, can't work enough, now must write my story in english and post it. Good luck to all participants! It was hard, it was fast, and then i can go to bed!:d
  05 May 2006
Arrow Story and HD!

Gojira and cgoz thanks for help and support!!!

Here' a link for hd (580ko) ---> Lombardohd.jpg


And the story :

""Dad, Daddy.... why you must do this Journey.... Please don't go...

My Name is Britney, last year my Mum died cause an strange virus who appeard on our beautiful planet.
It comes from space, some other planet are using the space like a garbage and we received all the pollution here, on planet "Chronik".
But our scientist have found a solution, an antidote, that can be only find on a very far planet called "Heaven".
They must find an exceptionnal pilot, 'cause the travel is very long, and hard...

2 days ago, Daddy received the order to get place in the "Eagle-Ship 1", and until this moment, all comes really quickly.
He has stop to work for the gouvernment when Mum leave us... but when he heard about the antidote... he can't say no...
And now, it's the departure, i don't want to detach my-self, don't want to let you go away....
Daddy, please be careful... you're the only one who stay for me, and now, you must leave, you must begins the journey....
Don't go away from me!
But you're the only solution, and i know that, i'm looking at "Eagle-Ship 1", and i can feel the power of this amazing piece of technology...

I know it take you far from me....i'm scared, honored and impressed all at the same time...
Take care Daddy, go with the "Eagle-Ship 1" cross the space, defeat the danger and come back home soon, come back near me...

The journey Begins Daddy...."


It's finished, thanks a lot all for help and support. waiting for next one!!!

good luck to all participants for judging, and now, it's time to beeeeeerrrr!!!

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