The Journey Begins Challenge (3D) Entry: Maciej Frolow

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  03 March 2006
Cool

Nice ship.I am kinda engaged with a ship.
If you can use some dirt and mud at the bottom to show that it touches the water.
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  03 March 2006
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Lemog - true, imagination is power. I hope I`m using it well

adel3d - thank you Adel, good idea but my ship floats in the air and it newer touched water
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  03 March 2006
Shading (Textured and lit): Working on the grass



Two examples of grass. I think putting high grass everywhere will kill the effect of the flying rocks. As I made on the second example it`s much more interesting to have the grass in clumps. The other green could be more some kind of moss covering the rocks. It just needs some bump and specular effects.
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  03 March 2006
This is looking cool, I like the style and nice texture work! Keep going
 
  03 March 2006
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Thank you Vedic-kings - it`s only procedural textures here on the rocks. I have to add some bitmap ones and make this green looking more like moss.
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  03 March 2006
Of course... only some "touches" of grass will be better... better to read the picture, better while enriching visualy... so, better for me
 
  03 March 2006
This is a great concept you have-so fantasy.

What you have done so far is looking great.

Keep up the good work.
 
  03 March 2006
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SONIC-X - thank you for your kind words

Lemog - yes definitly small clumps of grass will work much better
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  03 March 2006
Modeling: Inhabitants - seal



Seal: see description on image for more info ;-)

It`s one of my first cg characters ever made, please send any comments about the modeling. I have certainly to improve some details and of course make a nice skin texture.
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  03 March 2006
Ha ha, I am still pretty shy for topology correction or critique, but some wire will do better view. From this point, it looks funny and friendly (of course not to play trumpet) What are those artefacts on "forehead" and "shoulders" and... looks like bad subdivision to me. Head looks pretty nice but rest of the body need some tweaks. Mainly fin things. http://www.hasslefreeclipart.com/cl...images/seal.gif
Hope that I help you. Keep going
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  03 March 2006
Modeling: Inhabitants - seal



Just the wire.
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  03 March 2006
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Thanks Oweron - I`m posting the wire for more comments. Your link doesn`t work
And remember to newer play trumpet where a blue seal is around
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  03 March 2006
Ou, I see. Just use this one and find that funny seal clipart. Just some cartoon reference. Nothing speciall.

http://www.hasslefreeclipart.com/cl...anim/page1.html
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  03 March 2006
looking good for your first time, Just remember to kept all of the model's style like they belong together. goodluck
 
  03 March 2006
I'm so sad then... no chance to have some trumpets here ? hahahaha...

your green seal crack me up
 
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