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Old 03 March 2006   #46
I think both storys and sketches are really good - but as the rest I vote for the first. You could get very strong dramatic feel for it plus it also seems to fit more your style - so good choice
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Old 03 March 2006   #47
Zapan
Lol, yeah, thanks buddy I appreciate your oppinion I think you are completelly right!

Agamemnwn
Thanks for such a good analysis, yep, I was planning to put the vehicle far behind the main characters, the destroyed station would appaer to close at any distance shown in the image and I like the fact that Dr sanders was suffering after walking for a really long time, yes, the story is not at the beggining, but i think it wouldn't be as dramatic as at this point...I'll see how it comes

the_fgdf
Yeah, It has a stronger meaning

theuni
hahaha, so am I

Gunilla
yeah, I feel the same, So it is settle...

Thanks everyone for taking your time to help me decide, I'll go for the first one, even the voting was unanimous
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Old 03 March 2006   #48
for me i like MAGUZ and BOGGY story ... but it's up to you ...
and i wanna said that ur drawing is so amazing so ...
have fun, omar
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Old 03 March 2006   #49
really great sketching- interesting seeing two different styles-I think the first one would be very dramatic. hard to choose really!
 
Old 03 March 2006   #50
I like the sweet story, the 2nd

but I know you make something grand of the 1st concept...
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Old 03 March 2006   #51
Hey Omar,

Looks like you have decided on a storyline to your image. The sketch has a powerful look to the 2 characters faces, really like the childs blowing hair and the guys grimmacing face.
 
Old 03 March 2006   #52
Modeling: Dr Sanders WIP



Well, today I started modelling Sanders head, I think the expression will work as it is now, maybe minor details to fix.
now it is a full 3dsmax model, but i will bring it to ZB to see how can i play with it, ears are not perfect, but what the hell!, maybe they wont be seen, this challenge i won't work in details that are not visible at the end I am in a hurry and that is very stressig :P
c&c are welcome.
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Old 03 March 2006   #53
Hey great start here


Just i will say thats the ears are too flat for the moment...and the mouth a little too small

Great job so far keep it up
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Old 03 March 2006   #54
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great model and expression yeah that`s how I imagined it waiting for more
 
Old 03 March 2006   #55
Hey Omar,

Sanders head model is looking pretty close to your sketch's expression , great job. To me the head seems a little to wide across the eyes in the front view. I really think this guy fits your scene.
 
Old 03 March 2006   #56
Hey omar ...didnt catch you before choosing the concept but nothing would change becouse I was also voting for the first one . I like the first sketch more becouse of stronger emotions involved. Give it deep backrgound with some elements from you story and man great picture is comin .
 
Old 03 March 2006   #57
yeah and I forget ...the head is looking great and am waiting to see that legbot
 
Old 03 March 2006   #58
Great start Omar ,

Really powerful personality in this one ! I agree about the previous crits , but somehow it doesn't disturb at all , adding a realy cool style ...

Keep it up mate ,

cheers ,

-Zapan
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Old 03 March 2006   #59
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Nice modell! Great start! Keep it up and good luck to ya!
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Old 03 March 2006   #60
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Hey! Model looks very nice! Just like in your concept! Little crit is only about ear. Keep up the good work!
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