The Journey Begins Challenge (3D) Entry: Omar Carias

I think both storys and sketches are really good - but as the rest I vote for the first. You could get very strong dramatic feel for it plus it also seems to fit more your style - so good choice

Zapan
Lol, yeah, thanks buddy I appreciate your oppinion I think you are completelly right!

Agamemnwn
Thanks for such a good analysis, yep, I was planning to put the vehicle far behind the main characters, the destroyed station would appaer to close at any distance shown in the image and I like the fact that Dr sanders was suffering after walking for a really long time, yes, the story is not at the beggining, but i think it wouldn't be as dramatic as at this point...I'll see how it comes

the_fgdf
Yeah, It has a stronger meaning

theuni
hahaha, so am I

Gunilla
yeah, I feel the same, So it is settle...

for me i like MAGUZ and BOGGY story ... but it's up to you ...
and i wanna said that ur drawing is so amazing so ...
have fun, omar

really great sketching- interesting seeing two different styles-I think the first one would be very dramatic. hard to choose really!

I like the sweet story, the 2nd

but I know you make something grand of the 1st concept...

Hey Omar,

Looks like you have decided on a storyline to your image. The sketch has a powerful look to the 2 characters faces, really like the childs blowing hair and the guys grimmacing face.

Well, today I started modelling Sanders head, I think the expression will work as it is now, maybe minor details to fix.
now it is a full 3dsmax model, but i will bring it to ZB to see how can i play with it, ears are not perfect, but what the hell!, maybe they wont be seen, this challenge i won't work in details that are not visible at the end I am in a hurry and that is very stressig :P
c&c are welcome.

Hey great start here


Just i will say thats the ears are too flat for the moment...and the mouth a little too small

Great job so far keep it up

great model and expression yeah that`s how I imagined it waiting for more

Hey Omar,

Sanders head model is looking pretty close to your sketch's expression , great job. To me the head seems a little to wide across the eyes in the front view. I really think this guy fits your scene.

Hey omar ...didnt catch you before choosing the concept but nothing would change becouse I was also voting for the first one . I like the first sketch more becouse of stronger emotions involved. Give it deep backrgound with some elements from you story and man great picture is comin .

yeah and I forget ...the head is looking great and am waiting to see that legbot

Great start Omar ,

Really powerful personality in this one ! I agree about the previous crits , but somehow it doesn't disturb at all , adding a realy cool style ...

Keep it up mate ,

cheers ,

-Zapan

Nice modell! Great start! Keep it up and good luck to ya!

Hey! Model looks very nice! Just like in your concept! Little crit is only about ear. Keep up the good work!