The Journey Begins Challenge (3D) Entry: Omar Carias

Ah Yes Omar , That's a really sweet story , very intersting and well written , besides nice illustrated by a great sketch ...

Can't wait to see that taking shape with polys !

cheers ,

-Zapan

cool story and concept omar keep rocking

please show that... I happy stories...

Hi Omar,

great strory you`re telling here! And a fantastic sketch you created there Looking forward to see the first "steps" in 3d

hello man, well i really like the story, and the sketch is very cool, just can say wow! to this great idea

(sorry did just read above) ahh...u really think is tragic? i really like it, but i know a happier story can be cool..

this one has a lot of potential on my opinion. but do what your heart tells u...lol

I am Only 333 years old _told MAGUZ to BOGGY, I am tired of the enchanted lake and fishing every day, I want to become a Magician like my Uncle VARITO! YEAH! _Boggy said, This is our shot! why don't we go visit your Uncle and ask 'im to teach us how to!?
Maguz parents were disapointed _ a magician!!?? They said, but against their will, MAGUZ was decided to learn the arts of magic, also the fairy of the lake told him she had a vision in the waters of midnight that he would become the greatest magician ever, MAGUZ opened his eyes as big as a watermelon and an ear to ear smile drew in his face
But, _the fairy said_ it is a long Journey, you have to go throught the spooky Forest and defeat the red Oger before going over the mountains of courage and who knows how many other dangers will you have to go trhought.
adventure! MAGUZ said, Boggy and I can against everything, isn't it so BOGGY?, rememer that anoying talking fish of the bureaucrat river? YEAH, BOGGY said_ we sure gave a lesson to that idiot, we took his farts out, hahaha.
MAGUZ friends couldn't stop laughting on them went they knew where was that pair going to, HAHAHA, they said_ we told you not to live inside that hallucigenous mushroom, you'll be back when you get hungry! HAHAHAHA
but MAGUZ and BOGGY ignored them and so happily started their Journey to VARITO'S castle, a long way full of adventures that someday they would tell to their nepheus in front of a warm fireplace drinking a cool Mushroom beer!
:beer:

hahahaha!..nice story...have some cool story lines...


but i like more the first concept the tragic one...so..

1 vote for the first one

for me I like the second idea but I give my vote to the first idea

Antone and Rattlesnake:
Yeah...i have that feeling too, the second story is funny and colorfull, but I guess the first one has this dramatic smell I like, so, I appreciate your opinions, I'll go for the first one!

Ahahah , very funny second story !
Could work really well ,

But I keep thinking that the first one could show an even more interesting approach of the subject ... So I'm glad you're going for the first concept ...

Can't wait to see polys here !

cheers ,

-Zapan

Goodmorning Omar.
The first concept about Dr. Sanders its quite dramatic and it could work nice about its more about the nearing the end of a journey rather than a beginning .maybe if you change the time and set it when they are getting ready for departure for the destroyed base as dr.sanders has kneed down to let his daughter get up on the legbot and you see the destroyed base and the vastness of territory in front of them with the hazardous terrain.

The second one if more pleasant more funny and adventures and has also the unknown factor in it . what are they going to come across. But that doesnt matter . your characters are upp for it whatever that will be So its difficult to decide . i like the more dramatic scene but its more to the end and u can work of the characters expressions more and easier because of the circumstances instead of the Maguz and bobby concept

HI Omar I prefer te first concept. Let's play on jury's emotions

Hi Omar,

like the first one better, but don`t listen to me I`m a stupid Sifi Lover