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Old 05-22-2006, 10:46 PM   #16
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Coloring WIP: The fall of the Vess Khala



Hello again. As You can see there is lot of changes in this one. First I made it little darker, and plan to make it even more dark and hazy. Just like the storm is about to come , thinking also about adding some snow maybe? I'd like this envirorment as much unfriendly as possible.
Second change is another possition of sisters, i moved them little to right bottom corner ,to emphase perspective.
Im thinking also about to remove wings of the closest ship -they cover too much background..but we will see about that yet. As for background- well ,I always take backgrounds as a secondary target at my work. But this time I toked it as a first task ,so it is almost finished (I will add just a few details in final i think) . Now I don't need to worry about it anymore so I can spend rest of my time on the main subject -characters.
there is still lot to do with them so I 'd better get back to work . See You next time.
 
Old 05-22-2006, 10:54 PM   #17
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damn, this is nice. Awesome so far, no crits. Gotta wait abit before i can suggest some changes.

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Old 05-24-2006, 08:18 AM   #18
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Coloring WIP: the fall of the Vess Khala



almost there...
 
Old 05-24-2006, 08:34 AM   #19
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awesome , kickass, dat sorta stuff, u know


maybe bring out the foreground plant life more? raise it a bit higher on the right also?

and add some more color to the buildings behind the guards, some markings on the ship?

and make that shiny thingy up left blend in better with the sheet that cuts it in half?

just suggestions, great pic dude, i love that ship desig (the sixwing)


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Beautiful work! Nice perspective and composition.
 
Old 05-24-2006, 09:37 AM   #21
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Fantastic. Dont know what else to say... just good luck.
 
Old 05-24-2006, 09:50 AM   #22
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Wow, very cool entry! I really like this one....
 
Old 05-24-2006, 12:48 PM   #23
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Great one


Good luck hommie !
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Old 05-24-2006, 04:12 PM   #24
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Quote:
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awesome , kickass, dat sorta stuff, u know


maybe bring out the foreground plant life more? raise it a bit higher on the right also?

and add some more color to the buildings behind the guards, some markings on the ship?

and make that shiny thingy up left blend in better with the sheet that cuts it in half?

just suggestions, great pic dude, i love that ship desig (the sixwing)


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Thank You for all suggestions, or I should say Kittos
 
Old 05-24-2006, 04:17 PM   #25
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Great perspective, great environnement, great concept and great color
Great pic
 
Old 05-24-2006, 04:25 PM   #26
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wow. i can't believe i havnt seen this one before. I love it. the lighting is great as is the design and narrative. Some of the looser rendering i'm sure will be polished. Not long til the end date so the best of luck.
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Old 05-24-2006, 04:26 PM   #27
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Wow, keep on like this man, this is getting better and better.
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Old 05-24-2006, 05:26 PM   #28
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Great perspective and storytelling. Definitely one of my favorites
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Old 05-24-2006, 05:56 PM   #29
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master painting~!

U'd killed me~..

Can't wait to save the biggest version...
 
Old 05-24-2006, 06:04 PM   #30
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Quote:
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Thank You for all suggestions, or I should say Kittos


Pretty close, it's 'kiitos'


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