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Dude
Panu Uomala
Helsinki,
Finland
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the bg with the waves and the ship need sumthin more, i think i liked the original
compostion more with regards to that also dunno about the new character.. maybe if it wasnt so back towards the viewer... could be lookin up or to the side maybe..with a big bag of luggage on his back or sumthin . __________________
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Lord of the posts
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Cliff Cramp
Illustrator
Cliff Cramp Illustration
Buena Park,
USA
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Thanks Squib. What looks like waves now will be mist or a low fog. I agree that the foreground character needs work. I just dropped a dark shape into the foreground to see if something would work there. Good suggestions.
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Lord of the posts
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Cliff Cramp
Illustrator
Cliff Cramp Illustration
Buena Park,
USA
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Coloring WIP: Mouse Trip
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ooooh very nice....
like this one...
the cool colors... the fog... hey this ones got it all... I kind of find myself wanting that one mouse with the bag to sort of be steping off into the light a bit... maybe just a leg and and an arm (and tail) or somethin.... looks great! ![]() |
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Lord of the posts
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Cliff Cramp
Illustrator
Cliff Cramp Illustration
Buena Park,
USA
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Coloring WIP: Mouse Trip
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Yankee Down Under
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brian ward
previs animator
Weta Digital
Wellington,
New Zealand
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this may be a silly question, but what is the thing connected to the boat that crosses the rope? is it something coming out from the pier?
love the mysterious fog. reminds me a bit of the great mouse detective. ~B __________________
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Slave to Drawing
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Bryce Smith
Storyboard Artist/ Freelance concept/3d artist
global gaming group
Berkeley,
USA
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This painting reminds me of American Tail, LOL! Cool painting I'll wait to see what u do next dude!
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dum de dum de doo
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William james Hallett
Graphic designer./illustrator
YHP ADVERTISING
Yorkshire,
United Kingdom
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yeah first thing that popped into my head was american tail... excellent composition and values.. really excited about this one. keep up the good work. no crits
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Lord of the posts
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Cliff Cramp
Illustrator
Cliff Cramp Illustration
Buena Park,
USA
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Originally Posted by anzibon:
this may be a silly question, but what is the thing connected to the boat that crosses the rope? is it something coming out from the pier?
Its part of the Ancor |
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Old crock
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Torsten Wolber
Freelance Illustrator
Cologne,
Germany
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That´s what i thought...
Yeah, PACKRATS ![]() The ship however should be viewed from a lower angle and the rims you used on the characters are too strong imO. They´re getting off the ship, aren´t they? Great ![]() |
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Lord of the posts
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Cliff Cramp
Illustrator
Cliff Cramp Illustration
Buena Park,
USA
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Coloring WIP: Mouse Trip
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Frequenter
Wayne carnegie
3d lab assistant/ CG artist
mississauga,
Canada
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![]() hey niceee ..micee.. looking very good man good luck
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Min-Flame-Max
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Mohammed Al-Yousef
3D Artist
AlphaTech
Al Hofuf,
Saudi Arabia
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Hi SideAche
Nice work, i like your painting you have a great style, the soft fog covers lot of detail specially the water surface. keep up.
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Freelancer
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Kate Oleska
Architectural designer and portretist
United Kingdom
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That's a funny concept, but I'd move the frame lower. If you cut of the top, the viewer will still be able to say that the thing on the right is a ship, and that's because the viewer will still be seing the other ship in the background.
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Dr Ass-hat-on
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Simon Dominic
Illustrator
United Kingdom
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That's cool. Good use of distant blues and warmer foreground. Maybe the rope could use a bit more perspective.
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