Lighting Challenge #25: (WIP) Artistry

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Old 11 November 2010   #61
Round #2 Feedback

bimalbose: Overall your scene has an inviting ambiance though the blue light coming in through the window seems a little out of place especially with what appears to be a dark environment outside. I'm also noticing the amount of DOF you have right now is miniaturizing the scene and could be decreased. The ceiling is really dark and could use some light on it. It doesn't have to be much but the contrast brings my eye right to it. Finally, it would be nice if the light had a little more focus, whether it were on a few objects here or there or areas of the room. Keep going!

esswar4u : Welcome! The first thing that I notice is that the ground is very confusing on the eyes. The colors in the floor are too similar to the colors of the chairs and tables and they are lost because of that. From this camera angle it might be better to use the hanging lights instead of the windows for the illumination. The hanging lights frame the image well and if they lit the scene too it could improve the image some more.

colt: Great image! Overall the image is very bright and low contrast, which isn't an issue, but because of this the objects that are of higher contrast really stick out and are a little distracting. Since the stools and the chair legs are very dark my eye is immediately drawn to them. See if you can lighten those objects a little bit.

tuffmutt1 Nice atmosphere! I'm noticing there's a light leak in the back corner of the scene, right in the center of the image, not sure what's causing that. The objects in shadow could use just a little more defining with rim lights and maybe some specular hits. One area I'd like to see that extra shaping would be the crate and rod in the bottom right corner of the image. Just make sure to keep it very subtle but still define the shape.
 
Old 11 November 2010   #62
Rich-M Lighting Challenge WIP1

Hi, here's my first challenge WIP post- I'm basing my studio off the room I had art lessons in when I was in 6th form so its going to be a bit of a mess when its finished! The shaders and object placement isn't final, so the room looks a bit bare at the moment.

I'm going to add a clock to the wall and lots of sketches and paintings to the display boards I've put at the back, as well as some other items being used by whoever is using the room at the time.

 
Old 11 November 2010   #63
It's the first time i post here, i'm really a begginer

I wanted an abandonned place felling with the spooky atmosphere of the mannequins. It's in progress by the way, i'm not satisfied by all the textures ans the mannequins are too cleans.

I use Blender with Yafaray.

 
Old 11 November 2010   #64
Lighting challenge WIP - I

My first lighting challenge.
Maya & Vray (physical sun n sky) with basic vray material applied. Still trying to fix some shadow areas.
C&C's welcome.

Last edited by prashantzs : 11 November 2010 at 11:31 AM.
 
Old 11 November 2010   #65
I like the colors of your picture, Rich-M !

So heres my first try...
3ds Max + VRay 1.50 SP5 and a bit PS.
Im not satisfied with it yet, hope you can help me
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Old 11 November 2010   #66
changing model

Can I change the model a little bit?
 
Old 11 November 2010   #67
Originally Posted by punks: Can I change the model a little bit?


Yes, change anything you would like.
 
Old 11 November 2010   #68
i thought i will join this too
never been really strong in interior rendering so i thought its great way to learn some...

here is my current progress:




Blender+Yafaray
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Reality is only an illusion, you can always change it according to your needs...
 
Old 11 November 2010   #69
thanks for the comments

Hi..Dan Konieczka
Thanks for your great comments...here my updated version....let me know what you think.!

 
Old 11 November 2010   #70
Wip 01

Hi all... My first lighting challenge...

I'm using 3Dmax and Vray...

WIP-01





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Old 11 November 2010   #71
Artist studio

Thank you kanooshka for your wonderful tip , Now I changed the lighting mood to dusk , Adjusted the roof texture .Adjusted dof also , texturing processes is still going .....light focusing adjusted , and more importantly i have placed a new model in front. , comments and critics welcome !

WIP -02





 
Old 11 November 2010   #72
Hello comunity.
My first and fast entry

3ds max & finalRender.



Best regards.
 
Old 11 November 2010   #73
Really nice bimalbose... the dof still looks a little awkward though.
 
Old 11 November 2010   #74
First pass attempt with some final gather with mental Ray
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Old 11 November 2010   #75
first render. (No zDepth and amb occ)

this is my first render.. comments and critics are welcome...
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Last edited by punks : 11 November 2010 at 09:32 AM.
 
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