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  10 October 2015
Haunted Hallway & Fruit Bowl

Hey guys! First time here, so be gentle (just kidding all feedback is critical)





Feel free to give any sort of criticism, I won't take it personal!
And thanks for your time in advance.

Marco
 
  10 October 2015
and I think Ill do another tommorow. Done in Cinema 4D, post in Photoshop. Rendered in passes.
 
  10 October 2015
Here is a repost of an animation I did with a past challenge. let me know what you all think


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  11 November 2015
First Challenge

Hello everyone i am an architecture student and this is my first challenge. I'd love to hear some critiques, and advices since i am a newbe to the 3D world. Thanks in advance =)
 
  11 November 2015
Originally Posted by Eric-Harvey: I took a stab at one of the old challenges because I wanted to try a small interior scene.

Rendered in Vray for 3dsMax. Uses 3 rectangular lights and an HDRI. Render took about 3 hours.

This is right out of Max, no touch-ups or comping. Any feedback would be appreciated.



Looks very much like a photo to my eyes. In reality however there would be some variation in the reflectance on the surfaces. A bit of grease and some fingerprints. Maybe a bubble or two in the coffee and some steam?
 
  12 December 2015
welcome everybody
I came too late
But I liked the idea
what do you think

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  12 December 2015
Hello to all,
so a bit of feedback in reverse order
@Mohamed Fouhad, great start, even if the image looks a bit too bright and it's difficult to focus. Also you should check the shadow of the horse (that seems pointing on the left instead of all the other lights that point on the right)
@Eric-Harvey I agree with cgx. Your image looks great but I will add just a bit of scratches to make it perfect the plastic red material is just soooo cool
@demondandrea. It's a good start, the shaders (the tree mainly) need rework while the lighting is start to get in shape. The lamp and the light coming from window seems a bit too strong, try to apply a linear decay to them. Also before shading you can give it a try with just a grey shader to better focus on lighting
@nate the animation is so cool about lighting and shading, you probably need to contrast a bit more (it looks a bit monotone). how did it take to render ? I'm quite curious about it
@ marco. The corridor scene looks a bit flat. I will add contrast and why not also a bit of volumetric to the whole scene and also a bit of variety to the shader (more colors) that you can tone down in post the fruit bowl looks cool. The shaders are a great start, banana textures look good while the orange probably is a bit too big (the bump map) Also I would make the grapes a bit less shiny and more SSS. the lighting should be more contrast. That's a great start indeed
@Galele. I like the overall image feeling, very warm. I will blur also the tree on the right and make the background a bit less darker in order to focus better on the cabin
@nader, pls report your image I cannot see it :(
@syale12 the image is too compressed (jpg artifacts) but it look cool indeed. I know that probably the teenager in the room loves red, but the cup, lamp, and amplifier buttons look too much alike Everything would need a bit of grunge added (the floor is very shiny and look wet, and also the gym weight are not so reflective in real life). I love the light coming from the window and I will dim just a bit the lensflare (it's ok but the point on the left of the image looks a bit distracting)
So also I would like to apologize to give this feedback so late, but something went wrong with the notification I receive.
Great works to all and I will be glad to help more and give more feedback
Giorgio
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  12 December 2015
And this is version of bottle


Thank you in advance
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  12 December 2015
I want to tell me your opinion is also in the common weaknesses among my work


thank you
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  12 December 2015
[QUOTE=jojo1975]Hello to all,
so a bit of feedback in reverse order
@Mohamed Fouhad, great start, even if the image looks a bit too bright and it's difficult to focus. Also you should check the shadow of the horse (that seems pointing on the left instead of all the other lights that point on the right)

Thank u sir
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  01 January 2016
i was late on this piper alley,my bad, but here we go, c&c are welcome


http://s30.postimg.org/lwn8zdcoh/piper_v01_00000.jpg


 
  01 January 2016
Old Lighting Challenges

Excited to share my Old Lighting Challenges ,I really Enjoyed working on them .Will take up some ongoing challenge soon.Comments are most welcome

Fruit Bowl



Neon and Chrome



Candle Light



Under the Broadwalk



Haunted Hallway



Film Noir

Last edited by soumya : 01 January 2016 at 06:03 AM.
 
  01 January 2016
soumya

Haunted Hallway i like
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  01 January 2016
LC #42 Pipers Alley

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https://www.artstation.com/p/1beJo

This is My Final Image For CG Society Mini Lighting/Shading Challenge LC #42 Pipers Alley
I Hope You Like It

Thanks
 
  02 February 2016
Hi

So glad to see this thread is back. Here are some of the images I came up with. All done through Maya using Vray.
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