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Old 08 August 2005   #46
danimani, I hope you don't mind I did a review on your drawing:
Proportion wise I think you did well. I like how you did the arms (where obviously I've failed). You should be more careful with the major body axis. For example the shoulder axis - I think his left shoulder should be placed a bit higher. You narrowed his torso too much. Also from your drawing you can't really tell that he's leaning on his right foot.

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Old 08 August 2005   #47
10x a lot, Lunat1k
yes I can see all my mistakes...the shoulder, the position of the head, the right foot, the torso and ect.........next time I'll try to be more careful........ about the hands.....I use my own hand for a model...but believe me there was nothing common
see you
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Old 08 August 2005   #48
again "my own" hand
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Old 08 August 2005   #49
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danimani,

Thanks for your posts! Don't worry if you think you're an 'amateur', I think actually your drawings hold a lot of potential! The only difference between an 'amateur' and a 'pro' is dedication, so there's no golden rule as far as that goes.

With your David copy, I think you've got the right idea about finding the axes of the body, but I'll post a review a little later showing how to find these correctly. With your hand drawing, I would say draw a sheet with several hands in different positions. Hands and feet are not necessarily as tough as people think they are, and the more often drawn, the more easy it becomes to break past that barrier of thinking they are challenging.

Looking forward to more of your posts!

lunat1k,


Thank you for doing a review, and I think you did a nice job of showing the basic axes! It's nice to see others critiquing work, it definitely helps to get a variety of viewpoints.

~Rebeccak
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Old 08 August 2005   #50
danimani, you're welcome man, glad I could help.

rebecca, your lessons are helping me a lot and I'm trying to do the same whenever I can .

These are yesterdays (and todays) "best of" works (i did about 8 total and picked the ones I like). I still can't get my grip on the offset curves, I think I'll go through your OPPOSING CURVES lesson again. The other thing that bothers me is the arms (and sometimes the shoulder area). I just can't get them right :(. My arms look like cylinders or worse.

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Old 08 August 2005   #51
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10x Rebecca
Ok,
I'm looking forward about your reviews
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Old 08 August 2005   #52
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danimani,

I decided to do a demo less than a review per se of your drawing, because I think the demo will be more useful to you and to others. I can see that you're struggling with figuring out where to place the major axes of the body, such as the central axis, the axes of the ribs and pelvis, the axis of the head, and the axes of the shoulders and limbs. These are not always easy things to find, and you have to know how to look for them. That having been said, you can always find these axes if you take time to look for them. Here is an example with the David statue:







A great way to practice finding these axes is to trace, either digitally or traditionally, master drawings or sculptures in this fashion ~ only finding the major axes and boxy / cylindrical shapes and masses, without worrying about minor details.

I hope this helps! Let me know if something is confusing, and I'll do my best to explain it.

~Rebeccak
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Old 08 August 2005   #53
Smile Hi Rebecca

Ok..here is another...
I've started it early afternoon /yesterday/ and finished today this morning.
The problem is that I furst made the detailed one.....and after that I made the outstroked..... I know, that I made a big mess with the sketches......
Hmmmm the position of the right foot embarrassеd me a little.
And Rebecca is this the right place to post my rough sketches?

/sorry for my bad English/
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Old 08 August 2005   #54
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danimani,

This is the perfect place to post these drawings, no worries. And I always think it's funny how Europeans apologize for 'bad English' when most of you guys speak at least 2 languages, and then very well!! We uni-lingual Americans are always just impressed.

You didn't make a mess with the sketches, in fact, I think you're doing rather well. It really doesn't matter the order in which you create your sketches, so long as you are learning and getting something out of the process.

I like outstroked sketch better than the detailed one ~ the outstroked, or lay-in, sketch, is a much better kind of drawing to do because it forces artists to really think about what they are doing when they draw. It's harder to do this way, and it takes a lot of time and practice to learn, but it is more than worth it to draw this way.

Continue to do more oustroke / lay-in sketches, and I guarantee that you will improve! I also recommend tracing the outstroke / lay-in on master drawings, paintings, or sculptures ~ tracing is a great tool for learning how the master artists worked!

I think it's great to see your progress, and I hope to see more of your work!

~Rebeccak
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Old 08 August 2005   #55
Hi Rebecca, i like to learn more about gesture drawing, so i try to make this one, i like to know about the gesture, thanks for the input

 
Old 05 May 2006   #56
I havent contributed any artwork to these threads to heres some recent work. Im definately a line oriented person and I love gestures. In the meantime Im trying to get better at lighting...my weakness =)

 
Old 05 May 2006   #57
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cateaic,

Hi there, it's great to see your work! I always love to see Gesture Drawings such as these. Would you mind telling us something about your art background and training?

Cheers,

~Rebeccak
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Old 05 May 2006   #58
Its nice to see an artistic anatomy thread represented on a CG site, thanks for getting that started Rebecca=) I dont have much "history" with an art backgroud except that im a recent graduate of the Art Institute. Ive been drawing seriously since I started college and I try to draw every chance I get.
 
Old 05 May 2006   #59
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cateaic,

Very cool! Definitely keep posting your work.

Cheers,

~Rebeccak
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Old 09 September 2006   #60
A few gestures

Here are a few gestures recently done. Rebecca, I think you've already seen these but I just came across this part of the forum and thought I'd post here as well.
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