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Old 10-20-2011, 08:24 PM   #1
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Upper Body help(zbrush sculpture)

http://img651.imageshack.us/img651/84/barloradsf.jpg


I've come to a point where my progress is slowing down due to trying to fix the anatomy and still can't get it right(don't you hate that :banghead . Can anybody help with the anatomy and proportions.

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Old 10-21-2011, 12:43 AM   #2
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Old 10-21-2011, 09:13 PM   #3
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fixed some stuff, any critique is appreciated.
 
Old 10-22-2011, 01:23 PM   #4
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IF you are looking for more realistic appearance, the triceps could be more defined; it is a bit lumpy at the moment and the distinctive horseshoe indentation is missing. see some bodybuilders picts for reference.


The biceps in your relaxed pose should really be a bit longish looking rather than the flexed bunched up look it is now.

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thanks for the feedback Vince. Yeah, most still looks lumpy. I want to hold off putting the details until the forms are pleasing to me.


Fixed some more, still having trouble making the neck/shoulder area right:


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Old 10-23-2011, 03:23 PM   #6
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Looking much better already. :-)
 
Old 10-26-2011, 11:28 PM   #7
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thanks, took a break from that and did a female body.



Any critique would be appreciated. I wanna learn from mistakes.
 
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heres some update, put some quick extract to see how it looks with clothes and hair. Comments and critique is appreciated.
 
Old 12-28-2011, 08:35 PM   #9
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Try and rebalance the character in the side view. It looks like she is leaning over slightly in an awkard pose. Also address the body mass proportions. She looks like she has a slender neck, but has a rather sizable bum and her upper torso seems a bit big, almost of male proportions.
 
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worked on the proportion a bit, I cringe whenever I see my old posts so many things to work on.
 
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