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Old 04-18-2005, 01:40 PM   #31
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Very cool beasty you got there! I also like that you changed the girl from holding a gun to a more nurturing figure. I think that it's a much better contrast to each other! Nice work!
 
Old 04-18-2005, 04:09 PM   #32
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Thank you guys for your comments. Good luck you all !!!
 
Old 04-18-2005, 04:43 PM   #33
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well pal =)
as always, great stuff. what i especially like is that your work looks stylish even at the very beginning
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Old 04-19-2005, 03:21 PM   #34
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Coloring WIP: My tender Beast



It`s just a color variation but not finaly.
 
Old 04-19-2005, 03:33 PM   #35
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I can't really make my mind up on this one:

Don't get me wrong.. I like the concept... makes a change from people sitting on the shoulders of a troll or similar .

The dilema I face... is deciding if I want to see more detail in the woman... or less detail in the beast ...

I like the DC.comics feel of the woman... but I also like the detail and the fine short fur effect on the beast...

Grrr... I'm probably gunna lose sleep now lol

If I have to choose... I would say put more into the female... but keep it nice and simple... the contrast should be evident between the two parties in this pic.

Looking forward to the next update

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Old 04-19-2005, 04:45 PM   #36
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this is looking great. lovely drawing style and the colours are shaping up nicely.
 
Old 04-21-2005, 04:55 PM   #37
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More detailed Beast head. Feedback please
 
Old 04-21-2005, 07:25 PM   #38
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WOW... this is looking great I love the design of the beast.
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Old 04-21-2005, 08:24 PM   #39
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Your beast is very impressive! (and she's brest too )

cheers: Kornél
 
Old 04-21-2005, 09:22 PM   #40
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Oh yeah this looks like sweet
Maybe some kind of saliva in the beast's mouth : think about all those guys peeping your delicious sexy kitty He He He
Nothin to crit by now
 
Old 04-22-2005, 12:28 PM   #41
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Very well rendered beast and woman, both in terms of form and colour. Two things, though ~

1) You seem to have gone straight into the detail on the beast without fully defining its musculature. As a result, its body looks a little cardboardy (although its head is superb)

2) Thin vertical spires (your background) don't suit this piece, they break up the tension and fluidity of the creature and overall make the picture appear very static. Personally I'd go for much chunkier, semi-diagonal rock formations slanting right-to-left to contrast with the position of the lead, but that's just a suggestion. I'd also put a bit of solid landscape in the background and try to integrate it a little more with the foreground, otherwise it may end up looking a bit like a stage backdrop.

Really good job!
 
Old 04-26-2005, 10:16 AM   #42
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'ssup, i like the choice of the background! some alien rocks yo got there, they stack up nicely and correspond to the beast type,
maybe it's a small thing, but it seems that the background and the foreground and lit differently
 
Old 04-27-2005, 09:35 AM   #43
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At last time i`m working on Beast and replaced background.
 
Old 04-27-2005, 10:02 AM   #44
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AAAAAAAAAAAAARGH!
***k me!
 
Old 04-27-2005, 10:18 AM   #45
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Nice concept, as well as the Beauty and her Beast! I like the lines but you should add some reflex colors to gain a better imaging volume. Best wishes!
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