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Old 03-26-2005, 06:31 PM   #16
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ur latest update is very dramatic,i like!!
 
Old 03-29-2005, 06:06 AM   #17
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Concept Sketch: Enslaved to Sin



I decided to change the concept a bit after asking people ( my grandma especially). I finally came up with this idea. It stays close to the orignal concept I had, but this time its a girl fighting to get to "Good" which is represented by the warrior angel, but she is kept back by her "Sins", the devil org creature. I like this concept much better. What do you guys think?
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Old 03-29-2005, 08:45 AM   #18
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Coloring WIP: Enslaved to Sin WIP



Hey all! Just decided to work on the background a little bit. What do you think so far?
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Old 03-29-2005, 02:25 PM   #19
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Thanks for all the feedback guys, but let me ask you, any suggestions on how I can make my composition stronger?
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Coloring WIP: Enslaved to Sin WIP 2



Hey all, started to work on the angel and demon orc abit more. Any critiques?
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Old 03-29-2005, 06:45 PM   #21
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man i wish i saw the update previous to ur last sooner,cos then i wudda told u to go for a more dramatic angle,not just in the character,but in the background.

but it still looks great!
 
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yeah I was thinking about that too...Hmm any suggestions?
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Old 03-29-2005, 06:49 PM   #23
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nothing springs to mind just yet,but i wud luv to see a clearer shot of that angel character.hehe
 
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LOL, sure thing, I'll work on a better angle for the picture. I felt like the composition was sorta weak...But I wanted to do a horizontal oriented piece instead of verticle. Hmmm This is gonna be tougher than I thought...but it's fun working on it too. Thx for the feedback Noob!!!
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Old 03-29-2005, 06:55 PM   #25
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i liked that layout very much, because it has much power. your new attemp looses the piont of that hopeless tragedy, wich atcually has a huge emotional power. THe "angelknight is cool, but i feel like he is sort of not needed for a stron piece, couz it already is one, without him.
of course thats just my own personal tase. love your style, looking forward to more progress keep it up mate!
 
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i liked that layout very much, because it has much power. your new attemp looses the piont of that hopeless tragedy, wich atcually has a huge emotional power. THe "angelknight is cool, but i feel like he is sort of not needed for a stron piece, couz it already is one, without him.
of course thats just my own personal tase. love your style, looking forward to more progress keep it up mate!


Hmmm...I see what you mean...But one thing I didnt like about that concept was the fact that it seemed like the girl didnt have any emotion. I wanted to show more of a struggle. So the subdued slave is much better ah? I'll try to go with that then for my next composition! Thx alot for the critque th1st_angel! Back to the drawing board...er...drawing tablet......yeah...you know what I mean
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Old 03-29-2005, 07:08 PM   #27
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don't get rid of the angel.

*ahem*

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Old 03-29-2005, 07:11 PM   #28
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very nice.....

Has a very dominating overtone to it.
 
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Great work so far!! I really dig your style. The idea is great too. I agree with the1st_angel about the composition. There is alot of emotion in that piece. I (personally) like the idea of the angel to the rescue. Your angels armor is dang cool too.

Maybe you could incorporate the two? The angel in the distance high up on a broken pillar. The poor girl crawling towards her/him as the deamon, in the foreground, looks menacing and mean. I think that would look nice.....

Keep up the good work! Cant wait to see what your final composition will look like!
 
Old 03-29-2005, 08:03 PM   #30
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looks amazing!

the demon orc's anatomy needs some changes though... his arm is a lil short and legs are a lil too huge... other than that its just perfect!

best of luck!!
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