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Old 05 May 2005   #61
Red face

beelow: Interesting concept you have there. I like the idea of the water, but I think you should tone down the color of the water just a bit or make it less bright as you move away from the vortex in the sky.

Have you thought of perhaps putting in a subtle form of a diety inside the tower of water? It would lend a very ominous feel to the picture, but will be tricky to execute. Just an idea. Take it or leave it.

So far, I like what you've done. Keep up the good work and burn that midnight oil to get it done.


Old 05 May 2005   #62
excellent idae for the water.and nice vortex.
i agree with TMArtist about the brightness of the water.
Keep up the good work.
cheer s.

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Old 05 May 2005   #63
Great progression! My humble oppinion. Stick witht he tower. It seems more majestice to me. Good luck.
Old 05 May 2005   #64
Ok, I think I am going to stick with the tower and Do the vortex and try to make a face present within the tower.(Let me think on that one) Initially I did not want a presence to be there. I want to keep to the religious theme sort of like the Moses stories, when he parted the sea or when moses talk with that little plant or something, I forget.( shame on me) But there was no figure there. I want to show power of a God that does not have to show himself. I will take it into consideration...holla!
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Old 05 May 2005   #65
I prefer the left one with the visible tower

Keep going on

Old 05 May 2005   #66
I vote for the tower, the column of water doesnt make much sense to me. As far as clouds go check out Stahlberg's site, he has an awesome tutorial on clouds.

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Old 05 May 2005   #67
Coloring WIP: deity

Here I extented the canvas even more and started putting some detail in the background. Will post my final coloring monday.Holla.
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Old 05 May 2005   #68
good luck to u.
always look forward to urs.

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Old 05 May 2005   #69

Hey mate, sorry for the delay, i really try hard to keep up with everyones works. the last update looks great. my suggestion was to add a bit more contrast to the midground, maybe just paint a shadow pass (lumminance) in black on a new layer to tweak it in, and then, if you are satisfied, overpaint it quickly with a colorpass for having full controll of the tweaklayer
Keep up your great work, your piece made a wonderfull progress. Keep on rocking!
Old 05 May 2005   #70
Thanks, peoples. I will post my final either tonight or tomorrow...Holla!
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Old 05 May 2005   #71
Final Coloring: diety

Here is the latest. I just have to finish coloring and do some minor adjustments to the contrast.
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Old 05 May 2005   #72
better finish or you will not get to eat to night... or the rest of the week

just kidding ... but better step on the gas around 1 : 30 hours left.
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Old 05 May 2005   #73
That sucks I did not get to it in on time Even though I had it finished. but that's alright. I will enter the next one you can count on that. It suchks that I did not have internet at home. So see next time...holla. Good Luck to everyone!
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Old 05 May 2005   #74
oh no...
it's not fair!!u finished it in time.damn.
buddy,i'm sorry i can't help u.
ur work is great.hope to see u around next challenge.take care.

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Old 05 May 2005   #75
I will show you the final later. I'm in class right now. I am learning to use hair in Maya.
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