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Old 07 July 2013   #1
Help!! Reel

I don't know if this reel is good?

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dvlt...jxSMjkNqJtYVSWw
 
Old 07 July 2013   #2
Hi Jordan,

Assuming you'd like an honest opinion: It could use some serious improvement. The material might be good, but the modeling is medicore. Texturing and animation are below average. So overall, no, it is not any good unless it's a previz reel.

Tom
 
Old 07 July 2013   #3
better

Thank you very much I really did know that but someone was telling me it was perfect I know ity is not.

I am getting better at animation this is a clip of my animation I am working on
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OYz-...eature=youtu.be
 
Old 07 July 2013   #4
thanks

thanks here is an other animation I have done I hope I am not bothering you
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iik0...eature=youtu.be
 
Old 07 July 2013   #5
Quote: Thank you very much I really did know that but someone was telling me it was perfect I know ity is not.
This is why you never ask for an honest opinion from someone you know. Strangers aren't afraid to hurt your feelings .

Quote: I am getting better at animation this is a clip of my animation I am working on.
Absolutely. This looks a lot better. Love the camera movements! You've got a few issues with timing and position. For example, when the first guy jumps, he moves straight across as if gravity has no effect on him. Similarly, when the other guy gets hit, he is just suspended in the air and then drops. A bit unrealistic and gives it a slow motion effect. Not sure if this is what you intended.
 
Old 07 July 2013   #6
If you're wanting to improve your animation I'd take a huge step back and start simple. Do a bouncing ball, a basic walk cycle. I don't think you're quite ready for a complex fight scene.

Build that solid foundation of the basics, and move on from there! Good luck!
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Old 07 July 2013   #7
Originally Posted by Michael5188: If you're wanting to improve your animation I'd take a huge step back and start simple. Do a bouncing ball, a basic walk cycle. I don't think you're quite ready for a complex fight scene.

Build that solid foundation of the basics, and move on from there! Good luck!



I did not focus on the walking as much this is my walk cycle:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PU7C...jxSMjkNqJtYVSWw
 
Old 07 July 2013   #8
Originally Posted by jordanbanks: I did not focus on the walking as much this is my walk cycle:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PU7C...jxSMjkNqJtYVSWw



Just compare your walk cycle to any of these http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=k86w0zlzY54
 
Old 07 July 2013   #9
Join 11secondclub

I'm learning the very basics of animation which are truly fundamentals for any animation.Join me on skype if you want.Would be great
 
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