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Old 11-06-2012, 10:21 PM   #1
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30s Spot About Coffee

Hello fellow CGTalkers,

I'm excited to share with you this 30s spot showing the journey of coffee from plant to cup. I put it together to beef up my skills and for experience creating something with a narrative element. Also, cause I really like coffee.



This was my first time making anything like this so it would be great to hear your thoughts on any aspect of the project.

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Old 11-08-2012, 01:45 PM   #2
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That was really cool. Now, I'm far from being anywhere near great with this kind of thing. But I would like to say that to me, the transition from when the tree started falling to where the beans splash out of the cup seemed a bit sudden, almost out of place. That's about all the negative I can say, personally. Nice work though.
 
Old 11-10-2012, 03:38 AM   #3
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Thanks for the feedback binary10essee

I agonized over that transition too. It was a pain because it actually switches between two different scenes and time scales. The earlier shot is basically all particles except for the cup and saucer, while in the "splash" shot all the beans are geometry with a physics sim. I came to peace the transition after a while, but I was never sure if it was because it was fixed or if I just watched it too many times. Guess I know which one now.

Anyway, really appreciate your input and am very glad you liked it. It's always good to learn what can be done better in future.

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