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  06 June 2012
Athleek - 3D Intro

Hi guys, I just made a intro to a dude called AthleekVG on Youtube.
I made the intro in C4D R12 and After Effects CS6.

Please leave some feedback.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sYpVCgY0BI8
 
  06 June 2012
I like the sound, however the letters seem a bit flat, and out of place amongst all the other moving objects. I am critiquing here, it just seems like each element is separate without fully being a combined finished product. I can see each element, the title , the constellations?, the smoke, the shimmer across the title, and the sound element all feel separate without fully coming together. Trying darkening the background slightly to a navy blue or slightly deeper blue, and apply a texture over the title, I would try glossy. Also the lense flair seems a bit distracting even though it is small. Just a few thoughts, feel free to do as you like though.
 
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