|08 August 2008||#1|
Join Date: Oct 2005
Acting/Dialogue test - for critique
Heya, my name is Kent Alfred and I am currently working full time at Reel FX in Dallas, TX. I had some free time tonight while the wife and kid are away so I thought it would be fun to do a little animation test and get people to critique it! I usually end up starting tests and never finishing them, but maybe this will help motivate me a little more.
Please feel free and open to critique this to your heart's desire. Any and every eyeball in this world matters, so comments are welcome!
Acting test - blocking v1.mov
Ok, so right now I'm just concerned with posing and timing. Some facial has been added for clarity.
What do you think?
~ Kent Alfred
|08 August 2008||#2|
Join Date: Jun 2005
This is coming along very nicely! I think the only bits that strike me as off is :
"any at all"... the stationary hips deaden this line. If you move the hips forward, it may accent the phrase some more.
"For a week".. he looks screen right, and I think he loses some of his intensity.
I hope these are on target. Keep it up! I get working on my scenes when the wife and kids are out of the house, too! No distractions!
|08 August 2008||#4|
Join Date: Sep 2003
Thread automatically closed
This thread has been automatically closed as it remained inactive for 12 months. If you wish to continue the discussion, please create a new thread in the appropriate forum.
Note that as CGTalk Members, you agree to the terms and conditions of using this website.
|Thread Closed share thread|