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Old 04 April 2014   #1
WIP Critique Animation Demo Reel


Just hoping to get some good feedback on my animation. Thanks.
 
Old 04 April 2014   #2
I like your facial animation
 
Old 04 April 2014   #3
Smile

Thanks Dude.
 
Old 04 April 2014   #4
I think you have a really good start here, I suggest changing the order so that you put your strongest shot first which in my opinion is the running shot. I also suggest you tone down some of the toe overlap at the end of that shot as it feels a bit too much. You could also try working the hips a bit more after he slides in. As far the dialogue shot goes, I think the way the guy puts his hand on his neck is a bit strange and when he has his arms by his side try and make the arms have slightly different poses.

Just my 2c worth, feel free to ignore everything I have said.
-Yasha
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