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Old 08-29-2013, 07:46 PM   #1
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Thumbs up Character Animation Skill Tightening Sample

I hope this is the appropriate forum for this.

I've been in and out of animation for years. Mostly as a private student and I am currently looking to make it an ongoing career choice. So, I need to build a body of work as well as push and test myself to re-learn and keep consistent at the work. This is one my first in a few years and just looking for a little critique so I can be better.

Thank you for your time.

In the video, I'm using a free max rig (by Peter Starostin) and I'll be using that that for a while for my practice animation.

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Old 09-06-2013, 02:28 AM   #2
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This is really cool!
I like how snappy it is.

You could try slowing it down a very tiny bit to make it read a tad better, and add a bit more overlap in the body.
The biggest issue i see is the last pose, you should try and give it a bit of a nicer line of action.

keep up the great work.
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Old 09-06-2013, 01:31 PM   #3
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Hi Yasha...

Thank you very much for the compliment and critique. It was very VERY much needed and useful.
 
Old 09-07-2013, 12:29 AM   #4
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That looks really cool!
 
Old 09-12-2013, 06:50 PM   #5
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Thanks AndrewCG7.
 
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