|08-29-2013, 07:46 PM||#1|
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Corey A. Burkes
Author, Animator and 3D Artist
Join Date: Oct 2012
Character Animation Skill Tightening Sample
I hope this is the appropriate forum for this.
I've been in and out of animation for years. Mostly as a private student and I am currently looking to make it an ongoing career choice. So, I need to build a body of work as well as push and test myself to re-learn and keep consistent at the work. This is one my first in a few years and just looking for a little critique so I can be better.
Thank you for your time.
In the video, I'm using a free max rig (by Peter Starostin) and I'll be using that that for a while for my practice animation.
|09-06-2013, 02:28 AM||#2|
Join Date: Mar 2012
This is really cool!
I like how snappy it is.
You could try slowing it down a very tiny bit to make it read a tad better, and add a bit more overlap in the body.
The biggest issue i see is the last pose, you should try and give it a bit of a nicer line of action.
keep up the great work.
|09-12-2013, 06:50 PM||#6|
Join Date: Sep 2003
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