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Old 05 May 2013   #1
Taekwondo Animation! Feedback please!

This is my Taekwondo animation that I have worked on that I would like to be critiqued on.
I like my first kick, but I noticed my second kick is too soft
I would like to improve the animation with a more organic feel to it.

http://vimeo.com/65788240

Any comments that could help would be great!
Thanks!
 
Old 05 May 2013   #2
Hi Vivi00!
You need to track the arc of the hips around f 28 as it does a really strange move.
And to make the character feel more organic you should not keep the body in one shape ie 28-32 the body essentially stays in one shape and only the hips are rotating.
Also check that the poses are in balance, that means that the weight is centred over the foot that is planted so if the body is all leaning towards SR then move the hips more SL

Hope that helps and i look forward to seeing more progress on this shot.
-Yasha
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