|12 December 2012||#1|
Join Date: Oct 2010
WIP for an animation class - looking for critiques.
Hey everyone! Nice yo meet you all. I'm a long-time lurker here, and this would be my first post. I was hoping this awesome community could give me some good feedback on my animation I did for a class of mine. The class is over, but I like how the piece turned out and plan on using it in my demo reel, once complete. Thanks for the critiques in advance! I look forward to getting some feedback.
|12 December 2012||#2|
Join Date: Mar 2012
I really like your shot!
A few things I noticed that might help your shot are:
the weight shift at the very start is going the wrong way, and then it pops when the he lifts his leg.
Then you need to watch out for limbs getting hyper extended.
Then there is a foot slide around the 8 second mark.
And there are a few pops in the body and arms.
Keep up the great work!
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