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Old 09-21-2012, 06:19 PM   #1
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WIP Statue of Liberty in my Living Room

Hey there guys,

A quick render,

Please let me know hows it going. I am very mcuh open for all kinds of crits/comments.

Am planning for a long sequence, based on this test render.

heres my vimeo link

https://vimeo.com/49850239

Looking forward for some crits/comments

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Old 09-21-2012, 06:24 PM   #2
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Very cool!
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Old 09-21-2012, 07:37 PM   #3
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Very cool!


Thanx
Will be updating the work very soon
 
Old 09-21-2012, 11:03 PM   #4
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I think your key light is just a wee bit too strong. Other than that, great work
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Old 09-22-2012, 11:33 AM   #5
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I think your key light is just a wee bit too strong. Other than that, great work


THANQ James

As I said, am working on a longer shot and with more objects in it, will keep this in mind while getting on with the actual shot
 
Old 09-23-2012, 03:15 AM   #6
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Nice work, it's a solid track and the simulation is fine. As mentioned just play with lighting/rendering for a better composite. I would only suggest changing the position of the CG asset to not be as perfectly parallel to the edges of the table. Rarely do people have that degree of perfection and attention to placement (unless ocd or something) and little details like that help views forget what they are looking at isn't an actual object.
 
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Nice work, it's a solid track and the simulation is fine. As mentioned just play with lighting/rendering for a better composite. I would only suggest changing the position of the CG asset to not be as perfectly parallel to the edges of the table. Rarely do people have that degree of perfection and attention to placement (unless ocd or something) and little details like that help views forget what they are looking at isn't an actual object.


An Excellent tip there Andrew

Definitely useful !!!

Thanx for response
 
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Heres the firstpass for tracking on the entire shot
Looking forward to hear your views on this one

http://youtu.be/_GD12lOcZYo

 
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waiting for some inputs .........
 
Old 09-27-2012, 08:02 AM   #10
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Heres the firstpass for tracking on the entire shot
Looking forward to hear your views on this one

http://youtu.be/_GD12lOcZYo



Looks pretty darn solid to me
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Looks pretty darn solid to me


THANQ James

still working on the effects part. Will update the shot today
 
Old 10-03-2012, 05:51 PM   #12
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Heres the render

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jXPWakIKtGY&feature=plcp

let me know ur views, its just a test render, gonna make a fullHD render

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I think the shadows are a bit too dark. And the statues' color seems a bit over saturated compared to the rest of the video.

Apart from that, excellent work
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Old 10-04-2012, 06:26 PM   #14
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I think the shadows are a bit too dark. And the statues' color seems a bit over saturated compared to the rest of the video.

Apart from that, excellent work


Thank you James

am not much of a renderer
kinda just working out with lights and rendering
am much worried about tracking and lil' bit about effects
 
Old 10-04-2012, 09:52 PM   #15
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Nice work so far. The timing of the statue breaking up feels much too slow though for the scale of the object. Fine if it's supposed to be 200ft tall but considering it's on a table my brain tells me it's about 8 inches so the fragments should fall a lot faster.

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