Spidey Jump needs crit

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  08 August 2012
Spidey Jump needs crit

Hi there,
Could you give me some crit on this jump please?

Thank you very much!

  08 August 2012
Looks fine for more distinction why not stagger his legs midair and have his feet reach the top arc at a different frame? Also point his toes on take off, his toes come up and flex his calf muscles to cushion the landing
  08 August 2012
Your last pose looks a bit odd because the rig isnt made to have the character with the chest forward and head back, so change it to something more like your first pose.
And as Narntson pointed out, add some offset in the legs (and arms)

  09 September 2012
from a quick look the jump feels fine overall, just the wrist poses at hte end bend unnaturally.
  09 September 2012
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