|07 July 2012||#1|
Join Date: Jul 2012
Hello! Critique please!
Hello! I am new to this site and I am currently going to school for animation. I would really appreciate some critiques on my animations so I can improve. Thank you!
here is my most recent assignment.
|07 July 2012||#2|
Join Date: Mar 2012
You need to hold the back foot for longer on the ground and roll it more before it lifts off, which will in turn push your body forward and into balance.
Also there is not enough weight shifts from side to side when he is walking and especially on the very last tiny step around f 99.
The legs are too straight on the last pose.
I like the overlap of the hand action at the end.
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