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Old 12 December 2004   #16
I like the colours and atmosphere, however I am a little confused as to what the story is in the composition and what indications there are of a vast civilization. Are you putting in buildings or ships in the background?
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Old 12 December 2004   #17
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Very strong colors, love the sunset. Looks great so far.
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Old 12 December 2004   #18
Thanks for the critics, yes, after the works on the landscap, i draw a futuristic city who is attack by many starships, but i work step by step scene after scene it's perhaps confuse for somebody,... excuse me for my terrible english
 
Old 12 December 2004   #19
Looking good so far, nice palette... looking forward to seeing the evolution of the piece!
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Old 12 December 2004   #20
Coloring WIP: etape 9



I worked a little more the atmospheres and I have start has work before plan where will place ourselves the characters
 
Old 12 December 2004   #21
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Still looks great! I think the FG grass may be a bit too dark.
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Old 12 December 2004   #22
Looks good so far. I feel the grass could have been lighter in colour and less tall or even take less space on the page so that you can see more of the river. I'm waiting to see the characters and ships in! C'est bien jusqu'a present. Je pense que l'herbe aurait pu etre un peu moins fonce et un plus court ou bien meme prendre moins d'espace sur la page afin que tu puisses mieux voir la riviere. Sinon, j'attend les personnages et les vaisseaux maintenant!
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Old 12 December 2004   #23
Coloring WIP: ETAPE 10



I finish the futuristic city...
 
Old 12 December 2004   #24
Coloring WIP: etape 11



The beginning of the destruction of the city by the futur mother ship
 
Old 12 December 2004   #25
Coral tides

Beautiful vista, very excited to see you progress in this link. It has a oceanic quality.
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Old 12 December 2004   #26
good landscape like the colour and texture i hope you'll find good placement for the mothership

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Old 12 December 2004   #27
I think that You could ephasize main source of light some more. It wolud bring all the pieces together. Now they look a bit separeted
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Old 12 December 2004   #28
Coloring WIP: ETAPE 12



It's the first attack ship
 
Old 12 December 2004   #29
Looking good!

One thought... the planet in the distance looks like a force-field for the approaching ship. I think if you changed either the mist coming off the ships colour or the planets then you'd get the separation you're looking for... they're just too similiar in colour right now.

OR, you could change the planets position, or the ships...

I think you need to tone the city down as well, something similiar to the most distant mountains as it does look like it's behind them. That'll help with it's scale and the depth of the image.

Nice job so far, I love the sky!
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Old 12 December 2004   #30
thank for critic i suppose i change the position of the ship, for the city, the muontain are so far than the city, but i make an error on the layer, this is not behind the mountain
sorry for my english
 
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