Grand Space Opera 2D Entry: Cliff Cramp

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  11 November 2004
This is really dynamic, great pespective and sense of drama. The yellowish explosions don't do anything for me though, try using more oranges and deep/brownish reds, and show huge bit of building coming off and falling
 
  11 November 2004
Very nice overall feel. The ship and building designs are like in the old sci-fi movies. And the blueish color adds a certain feel to it . Im definiatelly waiting for more to come
 
  11 November 2004
Yea! This is coming up great!
 
  11 November 2004
Thanks gang, i'm starting to feel better about this one, though it needs more works

Taz - Thanks for the advice and encouragement

v_Shane - You're right, the expolsions need work, they lack depth right now.

Lenz - Thanks

T-Lee - always glad to have your encouragement

Squibitt - thanks bud

Misled - Thanks bubba

Windowlicker - I've added some building part falling in front of the window, it still needs work-thanks for the suggestions

AirboRn- thanks

Arctis - thanks

fifty-five - It usually takes me about a day or two to paint one of these - however I'm working on this slowly because of the competition. It's good to get the FB from the community which is what makes this stuff fun.
 
  11 November 2004
Great work! Love the movement of the figures. Looking forward to the next update.
Good luck.

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  11 November 2004
One of my favorites 2d entries. Keep up the good work man.
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  11 November 2004
I think the two laserbeams or whatever it is are a bit to fat. Makes everything look smaller now...don't know why. The composition and feeling you had befor suffers, in my opinion.

Great work on the fleeing people, looks very realistic;Very dynamic

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  11 November 2004
Thanks guys,

Tommy - good point
 
  11 November 2004
Coloring WIP: Assault



Modifying the ship a bit. I'll start playing with the lighting in the foreground.
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  11 November 2004
I am liking your colours, but i find that their is not much of a personal element to the image . Does not feel me with m uch emotion. perhaps it is becasue i can hardly see any of the people being attacked. Also cuts them off at the bottom of the picture as if they are not important and we should just concentrate on the ship.

But the destruction in the background and your style of painting is very very good.
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  11 November 2004
Thanks Wil. On this one I wasn't after intimacy. This one is more of an establishing shot. I do get what you mean though.
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  11 November 2004
Hi Sideache!

I really like your crowd! People in there feel very alive and in panic. I know you've not finished yet, so I restrain myself to say comment about color, but, just in case, maybe you should lower the contrast of your main battleship. It'll give us more perspective.

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  11 November 2004
Coloring WIP: Assault



I added more contrast to the foreground and less contrast in the main ship. I also changed the rays and thinned them down.
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  11 November 2004
Wow, looking gorgeous, too bad I found this threat so late...
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  11 November 2004
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Yeah... looks much better now. Go on...go on!
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