Grand Space Opera 2D Entry: Blaz Porenta

You have an interesting idea with the first sketch, personally I'm new here but the first thing I look for is originality, while I think the jellyfish/planet thing is kind of amusing I think it lacks the feeling of the first sketch, I think I essentially just repeated some of the posts before me but hey that's the way I feel!

gotta say too that I much prefer the first one - it's really quite interesting, the composition is fine and there is so much potential. It's good to explore possiblities but it doesn't always mean your first idea is inferior to your next...in this case, that's precisely the situation.

keep it up!

-g

Deal... i'll stick with the first one Thnx, i really appreciate ur opinions!

ninja: Pleasure on my side I am looking forward for the next step of your work.

NinjaASSN: I love the jellyfish idea and I love the richness of your concepts.....outstanding

Cool concept! But in my opinion the size of the city isn't displayed well.

element5: thnx, but that concept will wait till i'll have enough free time to realise it. For GSO challenge i'll do the first one. Im glad u like it

arden_rey: which concept do u think? the last one? Anyway, thnx for ur comment!

HI Ninja.

Maybe the first idea is a little bit more interesting, the BG history is inspirating and it seems you feel better with it. The medusa concept make me think to Moebius with "L'Incal"..remember ? I thought to use it too..and finally I decided to try to find something else...(and I find nothing...arh...a lot of things but piece of sh...)..Let's play your insane visions.. ...(I must shut up I have nothing to show.).

I think the last concept you posted isn't exciting enough, it maybe needs more contrast or something...but it strikes me as good, yet not dramatic enough on a "grand" scale

very nice concept work though

Hey,

Your ideas are very nice and totally original. I agree that the first sketch is closer to the topic because I feel it's grandness compared to the other pieces. I really dig the little details on the first sketch around ledge area. It's close on its way, good luck!

NinjASSN, i think all your ideas are grand, the concept of the first one is the most intruiging to me though, the planet starting to thaw, coming out of an ice age? Very original!
Like I said all your ideas are great, curious to see which one you choose.

Thnx again for all of ur comments guys! I'll submit my next concept at the end of the week... its jutst too much other work to do beside this challenge. In my next concept will be some composition corrections of the first picture, more details, sketches and concepts of flying objects as well as of "people" and animals.

Nice concept but i agree with the rest bou the jelly fish so far so good

Yeah I also like the first sketch better.
It just has more of a grand scale feel than the jelly fish ones.

I look forward to seeing your new concept NinjaASSN. Sounds like it's gonna be promising.

Glad to hear you're developing concept 1, in my opinion that was far far better than concept 2.