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Old 11-12-2004, 08:15 AM   #31
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Thanks for the opinions, boys

starbuck: I agree, we have the same idea. See in the next wip picture (If I beat my laziness)
 
Old 11-12-2004, 08:11 PM   #32
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Artie -

Really nice work so far. I really dig the colors that you are using, and I like the strong characters in the foreground. I think it works a lot better with the woman firing rather than just being a standard-bearer, it adds a nice feeling of action. Why sis you choose to add the large beam in the middle of the picture? I'm not sure that it's working as well as it could for you. Right now it breaks up the composition some and sort of pushes the crashed spaceship - which I thought was really neat - off the page. Ditto the ships in the sky. I also like the feel of them being in a more desolate place in the earlier concepts and this new element sort of makes it look moe like an urban setting, but you could also push the furthest bparts of the background more to develop this theme. Anyhow, great work and best of luck with it!

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Old 11-19-2004, 06:47 PM   #33
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Wow, you really take our suggestions seriously. I definitely like this piece. I can feel the emotion in the fallen man and I love how she is protecting him. My only crit now is that I’m not sure who she is shooting at but that in no way takes anything from this work of yours. This art piece can only get better. Great job, Artie.
 
Old 12-14-2004, 08:33 AM   #34
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So, boys. It is sad, but I have no time to finish the picture. Maybe next time :/

Good luck to all!
 
Old 12-14-2004, 10:16 AM   #35
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damn... so many great artists cant finish this challenge.. so many good artworks will be gone :( other time than. Good luck!
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