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  12 December 2004
Yup I agree with KWAK on the pecs. I think it'll look better with it a bit more down. It'll be nice if you could show some protruding ribs, or some monster bones. Fantastic work no less.

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  12 December 2004
Modeling: Rib Cage Fix



Well I'm back from my break, and the first thing I needed to do was fix that sternum. I'm not sure if I want to change the pecks yet. I think I'll press on for now and fix that later if it stands out.
This screenshot is right out of zbrush.
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  12 December 2004
Modeling: Rib Cage Fix



Well I'm back from my break, and the first thing I needed to do was fix that sternum. I'm not sure if I want to change the pecks yet. I think I'll press on for now and fix that later if it stands out.
This screenshot is right out of zbrush.
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  12 December 2004
looks good man.
Can't wait to see your next update.

-K.
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  01 January 2005
Lighting: Posed Togather



Here they are posed togather. 95% of primary modeling is finished. Now I need texture this thing.
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  01 January 2005
i like creature's pose a lot - very King Kong'ish
great skin shader too, would help to add some color to it

She seems a bit unnatural posed though, i would rather see her in classic, helpless, head bent back pose
 
  01 January 2005
I agree with JokerMax...

The creature looks fantastic, the pose, the detail... with textures this guy will be of-da-hook!



The woman however looks very awkward. I have no idea what her relationship is with the creature. Are they friends, enemies? Is she frightened, just waking up? Her pose needs to be as strong and as individual as the creatures to heighten the drama of this piece... nail that and you're on your way!

Great work!
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  01 January 2005
I'm not sure if I like her pose(the creature is not to be discussed, because it's perfect). I think that her pose is good, I mean that this is how her body should look like if were held in that way. But sometimes unnatural poses look more natural in cg art I will think of some more helpful comment on it
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  01 January 2005
wow...this looks really nice...i agree about the head thing...i think is more artistic if is posed back..
very great modeling man!
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  01 January 2005
Looks great !!! go for the paint
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  01 January 2005
Perfect and nice.................Keep working .....
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  01 January 2005
Nice!! finaly somebody that can match my modeling z-brush skills;-), keep up the goog work, i wanna see texture at least so good as the model.
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  01 January 2005
Modeling: Pose Change



I changed the stiff pose and the constipated look of my female character. I think the pose is better then the previous one. Time is getting short, so I need to start cranking on those textures.
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  01 January 2005
Much more better
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  01 January 2005
Cool

I like your alien character, great modelling!

In my opinion, the female´s skin just looks a bit too plastic.
There are loads of tutorials available on the site, just search.

Cool attempt, keep going man!
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