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Old 11 November 2004   #1
Grand Space Opera 3D Entry: Yasser Azarnoush

Yasser Azarnoush has entered the Grand Space Opera 3D.

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As you all continue with my thread.....i was going to reamind a realy valuble gift wich we got from Mr edison (god bless him)....just think ,we dont have electricity???
they are working on a heuge generator wich produces the heuge amount of electricity for any of planet in gallaxy..especially my lovely planet (mars).....
i want to thanks cgtalk & cgnetworks guys to create a realy nice and clean challenge.
again thanks all of you who supporting me with your valuble crit and comments...and for the last, realy realy sorry of my bad english .
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Old 11 November 2004   #2
khosh amady yaser
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Old 11 November 2004   #3
Welcome to the challenge,yasser
Hope to see your first concepts.
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Old 11 November 2004   #4
Concept Sketch: Entrance


Good Luck For all Entries :thumbsup:
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Old 11 November 2004   #5
Hi adel )
thanks
. i was expecting you For an Email??

i pray for you To win
You Start Very Nice
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Old 11 November 2004   #6
Concept Sketch: Entrance


Hi
I Can See a Finishing Blowing Moment of a Vast War Galaxy
Wich is Finished by Closing the Entrance Door of the Ship , Becouse it is
Time to Explode and all Whatever it is Outside Must Burn.( all the enemies )
a Monster's Hand is Punched Between the Door.
what Do You Think About the Concept?
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Old 11 November 2004   #7
Hmm interesting - the idea is pretty cool, but I don't think your image reflects it too well.

What if you could see everything exploding outside (maybe through big windows in the side of the pod) - and the ship moving just infront of the explosions (classic Hollywood - almost getting caught but just escaping).

I like the idea of the monster's hand through the door - but you'd have to suggest that it is a monsters hand because in the sketch it just looks like a hand...


which leads me to another idea - what if the back doors were glass... you could see the monster with his arm trapped - or even with his arm chopped off... flying backwards away from the pod (ultra cool in my opinion) - and then the explosions in the background of a city or whatever.

Anyway, that was just my brainstorming, so feel free to pick anything from there if you want to - I look forward to seeing some developmental sketches.
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Old 11 November 2004   #8
Thanks For Comments Steve

In This Point I am Just Looking For different Idea .This Image Is not Finished yet

Exploding ::I will add Some Orange Lighting In the window For Exploding And all Yellow Reflects In tha Cabin.
Glass Door :: I had Study Mechanicahl Stuff Wich Leads Me To Create Real Objects Wich If Someone Want's To Make The Object He will Bee Able To Do so . There is a very High Pressure In Galaxy Wich Stop Us to Use Big Glass Pieces Like an Entrance door .So it Would Be Unrealable.

Monster:: I don't Mean What you Exactly Think Of a monster In this Case Maybe I Should Say Enemy Not Monster Becouse It is a Bit Early To Decide What Aggressive Whould Crushed Between The Door.

By the Way this Is my First Skecth In my Whole Life. It is Very difficult To Draw WhatEvere It Is In your Mined.
Feel Free To Comment More and More And .........
Comments are Very Welcome
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Old 11 November 2004   #9
Wink

Originally Posted by visualact.com: Yasser Azarnoush has entered the Grand Space Opera 3D.

Welcome to the challenge!
 
Old 11 November 2004   #10
Concept Sketch: Entrance



Some Color Added.
What Do you Think where I am ?
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Old 11 November 2004   #11
New colour is cool - I can see the explosion in the windows - but it's just hinting at it rather than showing it directly (which is a very good way to do it, draws more thinking from the viewer).

Very good point about the door - I guess glass is a little unrealistic for a space atmoshpere etc.

About the monster - my mistake! lol - sorry, totally misunderstood you there.

So basically, now those few points are cleared up I'll have to give my thumbs up to your concept - it's pretty cool if you ask me!
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Old 11 November 2004   #12
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Old 11 November 2004   #13
Thanks Steve
But I Am Not Happy With The Concept It Needs More Detail.
Or Mayeb Change The Idea..............?????
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Old 11 November 2004   #14
The idea's cool... but if you think it needs more detail then how about....

Changing the viewer's perspective to outside the escape pod. You can see the city exploding (or whatever), you can see many escape pods leaving the scene, all flying in the same direction (either towards the viewer, or maybe towards the left of the screen - I dunno, but something like that).

In my opinion that would be pretty epic, it's the same concept (background wise), just it seems to be 'more detailed' (and more epic) if you move to outside the pod, where the full destruction can be seen.

Just an idea, but thought it might help.
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Old 11 November 2004   #15
It's a cool concept and well made sketch, but it just doesn't feel like a grand space opera...

Steve's suggestion to keep everything about the idea itself and simply move the camera outside sounds like a good plan to me, you'll get an entirely different scene but no need to rethink the story.
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