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  12 December 2004
good work Bartok!
i like the robot, look likes megaman robots
the textures is great too! congrats

keep going dude
see it...
Abraço aew mano
força aew
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  12 December 2004
Arturro - Thanx I hope I have some ups tomorrow

Emmanuel - Thanx . I will....

Lauro - Thanx for ur comments . I dont remember a robo like this in mega man . But as I said in another thread its impossible to be totaly original .

Cya.
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  12 December 2004
Nice concept you always have good ideas!!

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  12 December 2004
im sorru about my last post, i think youre doing a great job, but you should use photoshop to make the enviroment real, maybe puting some fog and fire, and you need work out the background. thats it.

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  12 December 2004
man that giant robot is very nice and great texturing

maybe you find a camera looking at the robot from down - up near the giant robot to make it look massive and more scary, just an idea.

keep it up man great job
 
  12 December 2004
uh...Thanx emmanuel .

Lelantos - I agree with you , Im trying some things . But its hard to find time now.
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  12 December 2004
the gun , and some tests , off course I wont copy the robots like I did in this test. Coments are welcome.
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  12 December 2004
What is wrong?
I have few comments .
Im just on this contest to learn .
Hope u can help me.....
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  12 December 2004
well... i like the image... but it needs more work... more detail ... + there is to much blur :(
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  12 December 2004
Hi there! I like your tests very much... and here are my 2 cents to improve it:
- In my opinion the mech should have more bended legs, and the body should be generaly posed lower, it would add more realism and dynamism
- It would look nice if he in his left hand held the gun like it is now in the right hand, the body woul dbe bended towards camera, and right arm with a gun also would be targeted into the sky in the direction of the left upper corner of th epicture... (I hope you got what I mean, because by my description I'm not sure if I understand it)
- falling mechs should have arms up
- ship is great, but it would be good if some small plates, or other parts came off the part of the ship where the main mech is...
that's all for now I hope some of this would be helpful! I'll be back here
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  12 December 2004
very cool man I Like it you learn a lot from this work I'm sure... I wish you luck and remember that you should work day and night to improve your works... Good Luck
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  12 December 2004
Markovicd - Do you mean the closer part of the ship right? I did this to make it less static. Thanx for your crit.

Arturro - You were very helpful , I agree with almos everything you wrote. Except about the gun , I think the way it is gives a look of surprise ..... Thanx for your help.

Divaise - yeah ,I learned alot in this work , good luck to you too.
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  12 December 2004
You Must Submit This Properly To Get Credit For Entry Wip

Hey man please please check this out-

You must submit all steps through the following link or else you will not get any credit whatsoever for your efforts and with efforts as nice as these you have to submit properly.

LINK YOU MUST USE TO GET CREDIT FOR ENTRY WIP:
CGNetworks - Submit Challenge Entry

Anyway, great work otherwise... keep it up.
 
  12 December 2004
Concept Sketch: Parasita



Ok my idea is about space pirates, not original talking this way , but imagine a giant pirate robot trying to rob a spaceship almost his size infested with little robots inside it . In the battle before all the ship guns being destroyed the robo looses his engine to fly. This way he is traped on the top of the ship and by other side becomes theyr only possibility of defense . The robo would never let them go home or he would be destroyed .
Hope u like it .
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  12 December 2004
Modeling: torso



Started the torso
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