...What have I done!!, Juan Jiménez (2D)

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Old 07 July 2009   #1
...What have I done!!, Juan Jiménez (2D)



Title: ...What have I done!!
Name: Juan Jiménez
Country: España
Software: Photoshop

In this piece i accomplished some things i had learnt from great illustrators and i wanted to try out. I think i've made a step forward on lighting and texture :) Still a long way to go, though. It took me endless hours but i'm happy with the outcome. Crits welcome!!
 
Old 08 August 2009   #2
This is really funny. Good job. All he need's is a bunch of golden bananas in his left hand.
 
Old 08 August 2009   #3
Juan, this is really neat work, i really liek the way its painted, seriously lovely piece. i think ajsa51 has given a nice idea. but its all good
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Old 08 August 2009   #4
Overall the painting is incredible, but there are a few tangents bothering me.

The tangent from the mouse's screen right cheek and the ape's fist.

The bottom of the giant ape and those points on the wall are barely touching in various places. (plus I'm not sure why he's holding that chain)

Finally the spear flying above the mouse towards the screen is forming a bit of a tangent with the ape's loin cloth, plus the value/colors are similar. (and it looks like the ape is looking at the spear as opposed to the mouse)

It's so amazing, but my eye keeps going to those spots as they break up the flow a bit. Otherwise I'm just blown away, I love the rendering, poses, faces, just great work all over.
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Old 08 August 2009   #5
Thank you guys! Very nice critics Actually i wanted to add a stolen treasure in one mouse's hand, but it didn't work although i tried at least 10 different spots. I'll check out those tangent elements to improve the flow!
 
Old 08 August 2009   #6
Awesome work..made me chuckle..Great on expressions..Love this one for sure..
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Old 08 August 2009   #7
Nice! funny! original perspective!!!
Yeah! love it!
 
Old 08 August 2009   #8
the perspective is awesome! I also like the color mood and the different face expressions are very cool, too. congrats, the hours of work definitely paid off.
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Old 08 August 2009   #9
Great work and perspective
i think the mouse is too bright .
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Old 08 August 2009   #10
love it!!!
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Old 08 August 2009   #11
Love!! Love!! Love
 
Old 08 August 2009   #12
You are not THE Juan Jimenez, are you?
Not that I'm saying that your work isn't amazing, it's just that it was such a coincidence that you have the same name, are a talented illustrator and are Spanish...

I thought it was a real big change in style if you were to be the same one.
I guess you know him but just in case. He's been one of my favorites of all time:

THE OTHER JUAN JIMENEZ

Hope you like it if you didn't know him.

Nevertheless, great work you have up there.

Cheers,

:: santi ::
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Old 08 August 2009   #13
Thumbs up

Love it, great job
 
Old 08 August 2009   #14
very nice work
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Old 08 August 2009   #15


Very cool piece, nice action shot you got here.
Everything looks very good Enjoyable piece.
Congratulations
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