Sucre D'orge, Melanie Delon (2D)

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  02 February 2006
I realy like your work and this painting is very good!
front page stuff indeed!

your work is very advanced, so i will give you one small crit.
the childs face is some what flat and lacks some depth,
this could be due two two main reasons the backround lacks real depth and therefore has a flattening effect on the girls face as it contrasts with her pale face, or maybe it its the hair either side of her face it maybe a touch too light, and this would have the effect of drawing out the face in the same flattening way. darking this area may improve depth in your image.
Please note...
this is only a suttle crit as the panting its self is truly fantastic.

keep up the great work and i look froward to your future works.

Last edited by Lman : 02 February 2006 at 10:47 AM. Reason: typo
  02 February 2006
Am thrilled to see a new piece from you Melanie - beautiful and emotional yet again. I say a well deserved award is about due!

Love the subdued colours and subject matter. 5*'s.
  02 February 2006
awsome... love the elements.. c ya !
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  02 February 2006
Allow me to criticize the composition a tiny little bit; the way the lollipop 'touches' the arm (and the sleeve, and the hair that appears on the bottom of it) isn't really helping the composition nor the depth of the image, in spite of the apparent blur, it might have looked a little better if you'd moved the lollipop half an inch to the left or to the right. Other than that nice piece of work, soz for pickin nits, I really love the diadem :}
  02 February 2006
It's excellent, perfect, superb, marvellous work.. Nothing to crit..
5* from me...

Keep good working..
  02 February 2006
This is exquisitely beautiful. Ça trés bon et beax. Mais...

Her arm...around the elbow a bit funny. It's very much aslightly so. But not so noticeable. travaille c'est trés excelente!

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  02 February 2006
great work
  02 February 2006
Absolutely beautiful!

I love the character, colors, comp, simply everything!

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  02 February 2006
i like the tones very much. the expression is also quite nice. very sad if you ask me. very nice eyes and lips i like those.

lovely work.


  02 February 2006
Lovely painting, I do have a little crit. I think the eyes would fit more with a more mature woman, not a little girl. There's something about them, perhaps childrens eyelids are less dark and a bit more puffy... Anyways, that's about it
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  02 February 2006
exellent boulot!!! 5/5

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  02 February 2006
Beautiful Angelic face!
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  02 February 2006
Beautiful! That's all I have to say about that.
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  02 February 2006
Tre tre beau, this it awesome its so soft and elegant, i wish i could paint with your sort of sensibility.

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  02 February 2006
lovely color scheme Melanie. I noticed you mirroed the face - it's interesting because it actually does work in this one even though I am not a fan of such a shortcut

And lately everyone seems to paint girls with flowers in their hair..I think I need to change the look of my current's girls hairdo.. 0_o
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