Judith, Marta Dahlig (2D)

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  05 May 2009
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Originally Posted by BlacKeri: Well, I hope you enjoyed the material, any comments/crits will be most appreciated.


Crit:

It may be only me, but the perspective planes in this image are wonky. The carpeted floor in the back appears to be on a different plane than the right corner with the head of Holophernes; and the vanishing point for the floor and bed appear to go in different directions.

I assume this was not intentional; since you are a meticulous painter.

Also the right foot looks flatish and w/o structure. (But, I wouldn't bother reworking it since most people won't notice it.)

Did you just work off the photos you used as reference? It would have been helpful to have a friend pose for the foot.

Also, some of the fabrics lack that extra bit of weight for true realism. But, now I'm nitpicking.

You also need to work on your storytelling. The head of Holophernes appears a little bit like a discarded after thought.

You are an extraordinary talent. So don't take my criticisms personally. Your image is a virtuosic display that lacks a little bit of architectural structure.

Take a look at Delacroix's The Death of Sardanapalus and Massacre at Chios.
 
  05 May 2009
I'm very sorry but I can only give you 5 stars. I love your work and this painting is now on my favorits list
 
  05 May 2009
amazing! beautiful composition, exquisite figure.

thanks a million for the walkthough, very useful.
 
  05 May 2009
OMG. Thats incredible! I can't beleive my eyes. Beautiful images. Very inspiring. Thanks for sharing.
 
  05 May 2009
It has all the qualities of the work of the 'orientalists', which I love.
Beautifully done - as ever, Marta.
 
  05 May 2009
I was finally able to open and read the .pdf and now I see the head is that of Holofernes. Thanks for the .pdf walkthrough and videos. The only thing that looks a little off is the perspective of the floor, but other than that it is an amazingly beautiful image.
 
  05 May 2009
Amazing work Marta!
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  05 May 2009
Beautiful and wonderful, your dedication to your craft is inspiring
 
  05 May 2009
Simply Brilliant!
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  05 May 2009
real, is very beautiful,very likes your artwork.
 
  05 May 2009
Thumbs up

the beauty is so astonishing.. love her amazing work
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  05 May 2009
It is stunning for sure!!!

However.... What is that man's head doing on the floor?

Beautifully executed, but also scary.
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  05 May 2009
I'm glad you had time to do something for personal work, this is amazing.
 
  05 May 2009
Very very excelent work, Great job Marta..!!
 
  05 May 2009
Stunning! Skin is amazing! Especially on her legs - so real. Overall it's a top quality work. You'll be on the art history book in the future for sure, just like old masters.
 
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