Oriental Portrait, Kornél Ravadits (2D)

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  09 September 2005
awesome

awesome work, but why the boobies peeking through? It's such a nice peice and that just trashes it up a bit. It seems unnecessary. Otherwise, its very nice.
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  09 September 2005
Thumbs up

Beautiful,
5 stars.
 
  09 September 2005
The arm seems a bit long (to me), but the work is incredible!
 
  09 September 2005
as a oriental man i have some comments to this picture.The composition of Your pic are woman and a bird and some flowers .Honesty speaking your technical excellence is attractive,i kind of feeling good at it at the first blush...but i immediately figure out its painter come from a western culture.In oriental aesthetics the pose , the motion and the expression would be more
connotational ...Not so frank....anyway your job is excellent but not very oriental
 
  09 September 2005
fabulously awesome!one of the best work from u
 
  09 September 2005
its very nice, the face, and fan are expessially well done

didn't have eneagh time in my first edit but for some critique: i would say the cleavage wasn't really neccesary and kind of looked unatural to the rest of the image, also somewhat of incorrect in form. some minor things are the perspective on the image isnt quite right and the pose also does seem abit odd... but i like the image it has a nice look to it congrats and hope to see more stuff from you
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  09 September 2005
Great job

One thing besides the boobs poking out which feels odd, is the hands. The hands look wrong. The rendering of the hands and structure feels thin and odd.
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  09 September 2005
I love it! the left arm is a little too long and the breasts are nice touch but not exactly realistic. Just too squashed in my opinion..

The perspective looks impossible to me. should be more like this?
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  09 September 2005
really good work...keep it up

cheers
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  09 September 2005
Hi Kornél ,
This is stunningly beautiful. Good jobs!
Is she showing a little cleavage? Quite scandalous for a traditionally and properly dressed Chinese woman!
The only real nitpicky comment is her fan and the edge of the mountain in the middle ground are creating some unneeded tangent.
Regardlessly, your piece is fabulous!
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  09 September 2005
Colour use is nothing short of phenomenal, it really adds something extra to this already stunning image.

Wonderful work, there.
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  09 September 2005
I Like this picture~~~~nice colour~~~~~and the japanese woman is so beautiful~~~~~~I love her kimono~~~~good job ~~~~~~~****4starsssss~~~~~
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  09 September 2005
very nice work! Love the lighting on her face, very nicely done!
 
  09 September 2005
Lighting and shading are perfect.
 
  09 September 2005
Hi, Kornél!

Congrats to the oriental lady! Well done. I like the colours, and the "painted" and "real" birds on the picture (...and the woman of course! )
 
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