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Old 01-16-2005, 03:36 PM   #1
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Paradise, Lee Paul-sinclair (2D)



Title: Paradise
Name: Lee Paul-sinclair
Country: United Kingdom
Software: LightWave 3D, Photoshop

Just my first attempt at Matte painting. It was made and rendered in Lightwave and the details in the final image where comp'd in. Final image was 7000x2700.

I wanted to create an atole of beauty, some where to rest and enjoy the sun, where there is no pain or suffering, just joy.

A fictional land some where.
 
Old 01-16-2005, 05:48 PM   #2
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It is cool, and beautiful. But maybe a wee bit booring even in a large version.
I guess its the composition, but Im not sure.
 
Old 01-17-2005, 09:40 AM   #3
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its looking good alright but ive to agree with alice. something in the foreground should add more interest and more depth to the scene... may be a bottle of beer in the sand?... may be a nice drink in a beautiful glass.... may be a coloured ball that kids play....

but the quality of 3d is good... and I must say... its looking good so far, but a bit unfinished..

my 2 cents.
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wow, nice tones! a large version would be perfect!
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Old 01-17-2005, 10:11 PM   #5
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Cheers guys for the feed back, much appreciated, There must be something wrong with the composition, something just isnt right. Maybe something in the forground is a good sugestion.

I cant post a large image I'm afraid.

Cheers
 
Old 01-18-2005, 09:36 AM   #6
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Promising pict, but I agree about composition.
So I suggest you to make a close up in order to only keep what's between the two main rocks, in order to see these two rocks on the foreground : it would give the impression of grandness, I think.
Good luck !
 
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