Portrait Of A Girl, Dongmei (2D)

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  12 December 2004
Portrait Of A Girl, Dongmei (2D)



Title: Portrait Of A Girl
Name: Dongmei
Country: Canada
Software: Painter

My coworker asked me to do a oil painting portrait for her, since it takes too long to do a real oil painting on canvas, i came up with this, trying to mimic the oil media.It's done in painter 8, One day of working.
 
  12 December 2004
Looks like you succeeded! =)
I love this type of work, so it gets 5 from me. The only thing that really stands out, is that the clothing feels a little detail-less. I could probably find more things to crit in terms of realism, but since this is meant to look like an oil painting...no further crits. =) The lighting is wonderful. *claps*

What sort of references did you use? (just curious)
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  12 December 2004
I really like your use of light as well. Very nicely executed. you should be proud of this one.
 
  12 December 2004
Excelent. Makes me want to try painter =)
 
  12 December 2004
Smile

wow, cgtalk's service is fast, i thought it would be posted after 2days, actually only took 2 mins!
thanks Sunbane and Zukum
It's just a regular shot she gave to me.Nothing fancy.I created the light of my own.
 
  12 December 2004
Very good work, especially when you consider the time frame. The only thing that I would suggest is that you blend the colours a bit in the skin tone to make them less jarring. Not much, just a bit. That's my personal preference, anyway.
 
  12 December 2004
sucks dude.


naw just kidding, its fricking great! good color! very warm, im sure she will be xtra pleased. no crits for 1 day of work!

edit ok one crit. her left eye is not looking in teh same spot as her right eye
 
  12 December 2004
Perfect. Absolutely perfect.
 
  12 December 2004
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Wonderful,

..SHE OWES YOU A DATE NOW.
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  12 December 2004
Nice portrait you have there. But the eye to our right seems not right in perspektive.

Take a look here.. maybe you should fix that.


And maybe some wore work on the upperbody and arms.

Keep working
 
  12 December 2004
congras

hi i am sanjo. I am frome INDIA.This is wonderful.Lighting is wonderful.I ilike the the way the hair treated

pleaseeeeee......I want to know the way u worked. I mean the base tequniqes can u post me some detail.Because i have no proper book or guides .or it will be great pleasure to me if u direct some good sites about painter......


THANKS

Last edited by sanjoant : 12 December 2004 at 06:29 AM.
 
  12 December 2004
Cool Dongmei(the girl's name?) gots a cockeyed face

不要整天把中国的名号摆来摆去的,在我的眼里艺术的国界,有,但是是理论上的,画画关民族的气节也不错,但 画的不行就是不行,非常客观。我真的从画中看不出来一点意思,学苏联多久了大哥?还这么画,满天都是飞机了 。要说传统也只是学习了传统对于现实一点一点地兢兢业业的刻画,思想方面真的有待提高,而且,真的,形不准 的。
就说这么多了,等你慢慢提高吧

Last edited by little Picasso : 12 December 2004 at 05:01 AM.
 
  12 December 2004
Thank your guys for you feedback,
Grugi, thanks, but i dont think your perspective is right, becuz like i said i painted it based on
a photograph provided, precision and perspective wise, there shouldnt be any problems, unless the camera cheated.
little Picasso, 我知道你为什么来这里挑场子,不知你想到没有你这样做只会给整个
中国人脸上抹黑,中国人一向是以不团结著了名的,现在又打到国外论坛上来给全世界的人看我们中国人是如何内 斗的,你这样做只会使洋人们更看低我们这个民族。请你好自为之吧。

Last edited by DongMei : 12 December 2004 at 04:56 AM.
 
  12 December 2004
nice painting! this is great looks real.
 
  12 December 2004
Originally Posted by zhalimuto: little Picasso, 我知道你为什么来这里挑场子,不知你想到没有你这样做只会给整个
中国人脸上抹黑,中国人一向是以不团结著了名的,现在又打到国外论坛上来给全世界的人看我们中国人是如何内 斗的,你这样做只会使洋人们更看低我们这个民族。请你好自为之吧。

小毕加只是说了事实,那个小子对谁都不服。语气是重了一些,但是比你当初的那些P话更加有建设性,至少别人 是在评价你的画,不是在评价你的人。

PS:如果真的想给中国人争光的话,就不要拿一些老图来充数。评个4星5星的并不算什么,有本事把图灌进【 EXPOSE 3】,那样才叫争光!
 
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