Chickasaurus, Noel Taylor (2D)

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Old 09 September 2004   #1
Chickasaurus, Noel Taylor (2D)



Title: Chickasaurus
Name: Noel Taylor
Country: United States
Software: Painter

This is my second time entering this, i've added some highlights and stuff to it, any critique is welcome, i just like the strange ness of the picture,no references used, 100% me.
 
Old 10 October 2004   #2
i like your style, but the two things that immediately jump out at me are: there are a few more saturated green strokes in the trees that are a little distracting. also, i assume the creature is shooting water out of his 'trunk'. if that's the case, the water would not drip down like that like it was overflowing over a glass or something. it would shoot or project out from its source (the trunk). you're off to a great start. keep up the good work!
 
Old 10 October 2004   #3
nice work i like it but i would like to see mroe detail in the body of the chick it would make it stand out from the rest like it should.
 
Old 10 October 2004   #4
hey thank you very much for the comments guys it means a lot to me, Christoff the reason for the drips was that it was suppose to be ice and the chickasaurus is drinking some water but i got carries away with the drips (the drips are a little thick) so it looks like spit, i will fix this (i think i convert ice to spit) and add more detail in the body. Thanks again for the input as i said before it means a lot to me.
 
Old 10 October 2004   #5
ahhhhhhhh i see it now it makes more sense. i think converting it to spit would be a nice change, as it (to me) looks similar to spit already, and looking around in the rest of the scene, ice seems a bit out of place. you really havent indicated that there is ice everywhere, its all green but nice work otherwise. it'll rock once you make the minor changes!
 
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