[ Hey Nude ] (nudity), Lucas Yan (2D)

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Old 09 September 2004   #1
[ Hey Nude ] (nudity), Lucas Yan (2D)

Title: [ Hey Nude ] (nudity)
Name: Lucas Yan
Country: France
Software: Photoshop

This piece is entitled "Hey Nude".
I wanted to captivate your eye while emphasizing, the glance and the nudity of the model.
While exploiting the color of the skin and its sensual glance too.
I use Photoshop CS and a shelf WACOM A6.
Please also look my drawing and comments are most welcome.
Old 09 September 2004   #2
Red face

Maybe she needs some more color al the lips, right know she looks weird, like Mr. Big or something...
Old 09 September 2004   #3
the neck is the problem it looks way to large, especially the right side, try to correct that, and itll be better
Im not feeling smart so Ill leave this blank until something comes to my mind.
Old 09 September 2004   #4
Originally Posted by danydrunk: the neck is the problem it looks way to large, especially the right side, try to correct that, and itll be better

I think that's because the head and body are from two different photographs that have been smudged together.
blah blah blah
Old 09 September 2004   #5
Talking Nice!

Well the overall toning (colour) is good! And you got some skills in figure drawing, really... (my eyes keep looking on that...) Yeah, maybe the neck is way too big... And maybe you can try smoothing the hair abit??

Just my humble view!
Old 09 September 2004   #6
short critique

I recognize the reference that you have used. There is a definite issue with the neck. Work on the drawing a bit. Nothing will improve a painting as much as good drawing. Also, one of the main problems when painting nude figures is the use of the same colors across the entire form. This generally leads to a very artificial looking rendering. Try to use many different colors in you skin tones. There are a wonderful variety present but they are subtle.

Keep the brushes pointed
Old 09 September 2004   #7

I like the picture, but i belive hse would need some more colours on her lips and well a litle more colours on the whole pice ... anyways very neat....
Old 09 September 2004   #8
Thank you, to have lost to answer me, I will correct my errors on the difference between the face and the body. Thus, that the width of the neck on the right. But, the top- models have a ostriches neck, it is well-known, I joke ^^

Sorry, for my poor english

PS: A question, can i reposter my image later with the corrections?

Last edited by sH1 : 09 September 2004 at 09:25 AM.
Old 09 September 2004   #9
Foto from domai.com?
Old 09 September 2004   #10

yes , its a great site to grab some nudes photos !!! ^^

it's my reference.
Old 10 October 2004   #11
Originally Posted by sH1: yes , its a great site to grab some nudes photos !!! ^^

it's my reference.

Plenty of good looking girls on that website, but I cant find any good orthographic front and side views.
Old 10 October 2004   #12
good but not yet

The paint is good, but it need more work. I think her face looks like un-dead, she maybe need more color on the face.
Everyone has noted her neck, it needs more work, but no one says notting about the hair, it is just awesome.
Good but no yet.-

>> red_1682.-
Old 11 November 2004   #13

very good
Old 01 January 2006   #14
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